I wonder what had gotten into me… 🙄
words that once freely flowed like water are now harder to catch…
anyways.. Thursday is here 🙂
and so is the Rally…
Yep Jingle is back with the Thursday Poets Rally this weekk.. all you poets out there do check out the Rally site and join in 🙂
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/09/22/thursday-poets-rally-week-29-sept-23-29/
and this time.. again i am back with a poem..
well not exactly a poem but its a HAIKU 😀
yep dabbling in haiku again.. haiku masters spare me the rod cos i am still learning the ropes of the poetic forms…
~::~ Sleep-walking ~::~
Lost in dreams he walked
Backwards retraced steps asleep
Tripped and fell head first
I hope you liked this haiku.. Do lemme know your thoughts..
Thats it from Megzone for now..
Keep smiling..!! Keep Rocking..!! Keep Blogging…!!
Cheerios..!! 
Megzone 
LOL.. poor fella, Megz.. hope his head is ok..!
are u sure u didn’t manipulate this? making the “she” into “he”? sounds like something u’d do 😉
lol 😀 leoooo
will ask him how his head feels 😛
and no i dint cheat on the he/she part 😛
it was indeed a HE 😛
why.. cos only men are idiosyncratic 😛
heeheheheh 😀
Thanks for the participation,
love Haikus,
u shall attend leo’s Haiku Heights, this week’s theme is bliss…
woow 😀
thanks JI 🙂
and yes i will indeed try to attend Leo’s haiku heights 😀
though i feel m not very well versed with Haiku i will def try 😀
it is easier to have your link in now,
love your positive energy,
your comments always rock!
weeeeeeeeeeee…….thanks Ji 😀
Positively delightful…thanks for the smiles.
aaww..thanks martin :d
glad i could get you some smiles 😀
Loved your haiku. I have never been able to express myself in such elegance so swiftly. Conjures up a picture that is both nuanced and beautiful. Very enjoyable to read then daydream about.
crb.
thank you CRB dear 🙂
i am still amateur at haikus 😀
keep trying my hand at them on and off…
thanks for appreciating :d
Fun!! I really like this.
thank you soo much for stoppin by and likin it :d
Time to get a egg and roll on his poor head XD~
LOL 😀
poor fella 😀
thanks for stopping by dear 🙂
Really funny. I have not tried to write a Haiku, as yet. I always have too many words trying to rush out.
penelope..
i knw that feeling 🙂
cos once i start writing its either a huge poem or its nothin 😀
but i keep tryin haikus once in a while 😀
brilliant. poor guy. loved the cartoon 🙂
thank you soo much dear trisha 😀
Poor Guy… :P.. Lovely to read- the cartoon is so apt.. It is rather refreshing to read a humor.. I too gag with depressed feelings.. 😀
Love
Happy Rally
thank you dear Olivia 😀
ha. fun haiku….poor guy
aww..thansk Brian 😀
Neatly done! However, why is it a male character thats acting loony. Why cant women be portrayed loony as well? 😛
aaaainggg….. 😯
watchu doing on my blog :O
its been wat eeoonnsss since i saw u here 🙄
anyways thankiiiess a bunch 😀
oh well men are more idiosyncratic than us women 😉
we are more sophisticated u see we dont sleep walk 😛
so well thats ur answer and thanks for writing in 😀
I loved the Megz.. smiles..
Happy Rally…
Rhyming Waters
–Someone Is Special–
aaw..thank you dear SIS 😀
happy rallying you too 😀
i really enjoy haiku…. i like that this can be interpreted literally….somebody stumbling around or look at it in a deeper way, like how we subconsciously re-construct our past, and sometimes will fall head first right back into the old routines / problems /situations… just my take. fun haiku. take good care.
wooww..thats a wonderful insight dear 😉
though i had definitely not planned it in that way.. but i like the way you look at things 🙂
thank you soo much for writing in dear 🙂
happy rally 😀
700 miles just said what i felt… good one megzone
thank you so much for writing in dear 🙂
Happy rally
Very nice…. specially as I like haiku’s a lot… thanks for sharing…
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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i am not much into haikus jus dabble with them once in a while 🙂
glad to know you liked them..
thanks for stopping by 😀
How fun. Sounds like me, awake!
aww..i hope you take care of yourself 🙂
thanks for writing in dear 🙂
Cute haiku. I’m getting more inspired everyday to dabble as well.
thank you dear 🙂
yes please do try 😀
Always my friend always keep your spirit up as high as you can and ill look for ya next week 😀
aw..thank you so much dear 🙂
I’m a big fan of the Haiku form…and you have done it well with this whimsical piece.
Happy Rally! 🙂
whoaa..!! thank you dear 🙂
This made me laugh out loud!
heyy…thank u so much dear 🙂
glad to know it brought a smile 😀
I like it. 🙂 Very clever and cute and a nice haiku.
thank you morganna 😀
I tried the remady for the cold, tumeric,pepper and milk, I feel loads better now xxx
wowoww 😀
thats good to know Katherine 🙂
i hope you get well soon 😀
though i got the essence of the haiku u have written but am yet to appreciate this form of poetry..
gotta read about it first.. this much i know that its actually a japanese from, but widely used in english these days..
nice one..
aaaaree search maar.. mil jayega 😀
its kinda simple but difficult..
bada ozymoronic hai 😀
Nice post! I liked the intro and the adorable Haiku! I’m glad the Rally is back, too! 🙂
thank you christine 🙂
m glad the rally’s back too 😀
I see him walking backwards,yet falling forwards on his head. It’s doing something weird to my brain, in the koan way. Good write.
aaw.. poor woih..
i hope your head feels better now 😛
Chakk te fatte…
chak de fatte bro 😀
That was awesome. lol 🙂
thank you river dear 🙂
Great haiku! Really fun!
thank you dear 🙂
it’s kinda funny ’cause it happened to me once. LOL!
thanks D
awww poor you..
i hope you are better now 🙂
This was so funny, awesome write and perfect for Rally!! Hugs xx
aaww…thanks Amanda dear 🙂
Nicely done!
thank u dear 🙂
award notice.
Happy Weekend!
aaww…thanks Ji 🙂
putting it up asap 😀
That was funny and quite witty, Meg!
Oh…and congratulations too!
Peace, Uncle Tree
aaww…thannkkk u uncle tree 😀
this is a fun haiku, meg.
thank you Bing 😀
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Hope to see you in our lovely potluck…
xox
wwooww..thank you olivia
shall surely try and submit some entries 😀
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