~::~ Hopes Affray ~::~
Fog unfurls, diurnal draws close
My soul awakens, dawn of night
Feeble stars arise at twilight
Many years, I have lain to doze
Awaiting influx yet today
Advents deceive, to my dismay
Standing there with a blood red rose
Patience ruffle and surrender
Hopes affray, emotions tender
Destiny belies, as life slows
Worthlessness slyly raises head
I recline, again on death-bed
~::~::~::~
Constanza
The Constanza, created by Connie Marcum Wong, consists of five or more 3-line stanzas. Each line has a set meter of eight syllables. The first lines of all the stanzas can be read successively as an independent poem, with the rest of the poem weaved in to express a deeper meaning. The first lines convey a theme written in monorhyme, while the second and third lines of each stanza rhyme together.
Rhyme scheme: a/b/b, a/c/c, a/d/d, a/e/e, a/f/f………etc.

A rather sad ending to this poem.
sigh!! yes indeed martin.. the pic depicts a morose feeling too
Very Beautiful…
awww…thanks you Iti
super sad…
well done.
sigh!! i know JI
been a bit on the low too
Hmmm…sigh..could picture the sad effect of this poetry…..
thanks for stopping by.. i couldn think a better poetry befitting this pic
I had never heard of this style, you master it beautifully.
thank you dear… its something i happened to come across n tried
A rather difficult rhyme scheme. And a totally rockin one!
The poem which gets created by reading the first lines of each stanza in succession is just wonderful. Kudos!!
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thankkss… long time since u stopped by here…
this gave me chills. it is how i feel.
awwww..thanks Luna…
that cud be cos the pic is kinda haunting
Excellent form.
Very strong imagery.
I admire your courage to keep experimenting
heyyyy…thank you soooo much Sev
m glad you liked it soo much…
Do keep dropping in
oh god y make it so sad meghzy.. Long time to reach that state .. lets read a nice chirpy full of life poem now … go on
abhi kuch aacchaa cheery not soojhing.. so wrote saddy saddyl..
will try to come up with something soon
very vivid without saying too much. Just enough to get the thoughts across.
medya Sometimes I really wonder about web master… Hmmm..