Nature..Beauty..Poetry…!!


Embarking on yet another journey…

Through the poetic pastures and valleys..

Seeking new forms and styles….

To create new anomalies 😛

OK… BAd one.. but watever.. so here I am back with yet another NEW FORM of Poetry..

Parallelogram de Crystalline

Parallelogram de Crystalline is a poetry form created by Karan Naidu.  This form consists of 4 verses

of 3 lines each. The syllable count for each stanza is 3, 6, 9. In this style of poem, the beauty of a lover

is compared with the nature and described…

Here’s my try at the same 😀

~~

Glimmering

Like the stars

The sparkling eyes of my beloved


Swaying

The rivulets themselves

Come down cascading in her hair


Blossoming

Buds in bloom

Even they blush when she smiles

Look, the sun

Even it blushes when she comes

Moon her face, stars her eyes, flowers her lips

~~

In the first 3 paras have been modified in the style to 1,3,6 format I call it mini Parallelogram de Crystalline

and the last para alone conforms to the actual Parallelogram de Crystalline format with 3,6,9 format

That’s it from Megzone for now..!!
Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rocking…!! Keep Blogging..!!
Cheerios..!! :mrgreen:

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12 thoughts on “Nature..Beauty..Poetry…!!

  1. Oh My! What amazing pictures. Lilting.
    One hitch though…the word ‘blushes’ has less effect because it’s used twice within very small gaps. Yay! I like this one very much! 🙂

    • awww…thank you dear….
      aillaaa… how did i miss that one 😯
      jeeesz…thanks for tellin me dear.. will keep in mind in future 🙂
      thanks so much for ur lovely comments 😀

  2. where do you get so many info on different styles of poem writing…..i always thought there was only one…. it should rhyme….

    Kafiya millna…..loved that in the movie khobsurat

    🙂

    • //where do you get so many info on different styles of poem writing…..i always thought there was only one…. it should rhyme….//
      seecccreeetttt…. 😆

      //Kafiya millna…..loved that in the movie khobsurat//trust me i loved it too..
      wahin se meri shayari ki shuruaat huithi

    • //you know he dedicated this form for someone // i thought so too 🙂
      i did read that piece 😉
      //lovely poem dear… loved the imagery too keep writing…//
      sab aap hi ki kripa hai princess jee 😀

  3. Thnks for introducing me with this form of poetry…nice blog n i like the movie n music reviews u’ve put in the way…n thnks a lot for visiting my blog 🙂

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