I kinda know you all are tired of my Love Poems tagged [V-Day Carnival]
aahh… but this is just the same..
Only this also ensures my participation in the Thursday Poets Rally hosted by Jingle…
It was mighty swell of you Jingle to give me a chance to participate and introduce to me many other poets too..
Thank you very much…
and as for you my readers.. Here’s my poem
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My Open Heart…
I feel a magic in the air
As breeze plays with my hair
A name it whispers in the ear
His voice calling me near
.
My instincts seem to overdrive
Luring dreams, stills come alive
Drawing me closer to a silhouette
Hazy and misty his vignette
.
The fog spreads its icy wings
With it, a shadowed gloom it brings
Dispersing a veil, as if disguising
My clouded thoughts, condensing
.
Yet I feel a fervor rise
Drifting into darkness, my eyes
A picture clears yet afar
Leaving my heart’s door ajar..
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So here’s to all those poets and lovers out there….. 🙂
All you poets put on our poetic caps and take part in the Thursday Poets Rally….
and most of all thank you http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com#mce_temp_url#for the opportunity….
Megzone 
Hmm another good as usual.
\\I kinda know you all are tired of my Love Poems tagged\\ yes.. true. Ab kahani me jara twist aajaye. kuch chatpata chahiye ab hame 🙂
BTW, Angel is looking very nice! 🙂
//kuch chatpata chahiye ab hame//
aayega aayega 😛
kal ko apni poem daloongi i mean the IT crowd wali 😛
Hi Meghna, thanks for visiting my blog 🙂
Your poem is so dreamy and beautiful…it made me sigh 🙂 Plus im a total sucker for romantic poems. So im gonna stroll through all your V-Day carnival poems 🙂
woww…that was pretty quick..
thank you sooo much for stopping back…
aawww..thanks for the compliments dear 🙂
oh please feel free to browse through 🙂
its a pleasure having you here 🙂
Wow, this was fresh and inspiring!! I loved the image, amazing, very similar to what I like to use myself. I’m glad that I’ve met you I’m a huge fan already!! 🙂
wow…thanks Beth…thats an honoour…
Im not as good as u guys…im still learning the ropes of poetry…
thank for such a lovely compliment and yes do keep visiting 😀
I like the flow and progression of imagery. Thanks for sharing.
Adam 🙂
Hey Adam..
thanks for stopping by and for the lovely comments too..
do keep visiting 🙂
It rhymes with your emotions. Good poem 🙂
aaww…thanks Sam 🙂
hey meg! thanks for writing. i liked “icy wings” and the idea of a heart having a door that’s left ajar. but i think my favorite part of this poem was the “thoughts condensing.” such a physical process for metaphysical things to experience! i’m thinking about what that would look like… thoughts dripping? or just beading up like water vapor on a window? hmmm! 🙂
wow…
u have some imagination dude…
u rocked with that comment… and thanks for those wonderful words 🙂
you did motivate me to better myself now 🙂
thanks for stopping by and yes do keep visiting.. your comments wud spark my imagination furthermore 🙂
cool imagery gal… beautifully worded 🙂
lovely write 🙂
cool imagery gal… beautifully worded
lovely write 😛
*too lazy to write a comment so copy-pasted it*
nalayak tho tum the hi ab aalsi bhi ban gaye dost 😉
wwoowww…thanks princess 🙂
yaaar.. tumhare comments aur encouragement ke bagaair main kahaa hoti 😉
yeah i am a hopefull romantic, leave that door ajar…
lolzz…thanks dear 😀
Very nice romantic imagery that matched the illustration….loved the last line.
thank you very much.. do keep visiting 🙂
Lovely poem. I like the last line in particular and how it echoes the title. Interesting how some of the images almost argue against one another. Thank you for the invite. Glad you joined the Rally.
aawwww….thats a mighty sweet of you dear…
yes im glad i joined the rally… im actually thankful to jingle for having found me 🙂
Beautiful imagery, Meg. Bravo. Nice to meet you
thanks Ray… nice to meet you too.. do keep visiting 🙂
This is a very interesting poem…very mysterious. You can feel the foggy atmosphere…the mist…
thank you very much Alina…
and please do keep visiting 🙂
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/02/18/the-14th-sunshine-award/
a sunshine award 4 u,
thank u for the beautiful poem…
cheers, 😉
aawww….thank you soooooo much Jingle…
you’re the best…!!!!
you not only found me and offered me an opportunity but you also awarded…
You rock..!!
if they’re all as good as this i’m sure i wouldnt get tired of hearing them.
i’ll check out more later.
i’ve just got a lot more to go on jingles list.
laterz
yeaa.. i Know i can understand… n m glad there’s Jingle cos now we know many more people..
thanks for your comments dear 🙂
n do keep visiting 🙂
lovely! 🙂
aaww..thanks Mike 🙂
don’t stop writing about love…i enjoyed every word.
~IS
aawwww…thanks IS i shall surely try my best to keep them coming 🙂
Hey, its a nice poem. 🙂
thank you very much Nethra 🙂
Thank you very much for the award! And congratulations to you on receiving it!
I will pass it on:-)
Gerardine
the pleasure is all mine dear…!!!
Shine On…! 🙂
I Love it! It borders on sensual.
aawww..thanks Christine…
that was realyl sweet of you..
thanks for writing in and i hope you keep visiting 🙂