When you’re tired and bored and everything seems stupid and idiotic.. you think like an insane…someone whose lost it…
and thats when the negativity takes over….. and the result is…
Rants of a gloomy mind
It’s an idle sluggish lazy Day..
I feel tired, mind’s like clay..
Aint no urge to laugh n play..
All I possess is a look of dismay..
Not a day for me to be proud..
My head seems to be in cloud..
Nauseating, choking are the crowds..
Why on earth, am I thinking aloud..?
Melancholy seems to hover..
Jollity appears to be a lost lover..
With every second the day seems slower ..
Just want this day to be over..!!
Wonder what has gotten me..
Lost in gloomy reverie..
Feel in shackles, set me free..
Oh! Lord just let me Flee..!!
sigh…!! thats what happens when its weekend and you have no plans…
and nothing excites you… nothing seems right…
nothing occupies your mind 😦
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32 thoughts on “Rants of A Gloomy Mind..!!!”
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hey thanke henry 🙂
a great poem, lovely rhyming and good diction choice.an accurate description of a depressed mind .well done .and good luck.thanks again for the award .
aaahh.. the pleasure is all mine dear 🙂
and yes thanks a ton for those wonderful words 🙂
I loved it when you said “When on earth, am I thinking aloud?”
I loved it all. Nice poem.
awww…thanks Karan 🙂
thats mighty sweet of you 😀
arre yeh bhi mast hai….naseeb wallo ko he aisa time milta hai 🙂
kyaa yaar… bore maar raha tha kal uska nateeja hai ye poem 😛
lovely poem….it’s good to read so many talented and clever poets in this community.. and they bring happiness and UNITY as they reach out to help each other and cheer us all on. 😀 Congrats on the awards!
aaaahhh…thank you dear 🙂
it surely is a wonder to see sooo many awesome poets around 🙂
do keep visiting 🙂
liked the pic – and the poem as usual lajawaab
aptly describes the unplanned=do-nothing-weekends state 🙂
trust me saturday i slept so much that it hurt.. i felt like a total zombie 😀
direct, powerful, and wonderful word play…
I like your style very much.
thank U for the talent in poetry!
awwww….thanks jingle ur always such a sweetheart with comments 😀
Oh lord, just let me flee,
Why just, can’t the world let me be,
I wander across random stations on tubes and trains,
Only to find myself bound by Life’s invisible chains.
oh my Sri 😯
u and poetry 😕
u surprise me dude.. loved the last line the most 🙂
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sure will check it up 🙂
Lovely poem in the teen language…
thanks farida 🙂
Ouch…you sound pretty depressed…nice poem, though. You really have talent in expressing yourself thru poetry.
aahhh.. Nish.. not exactly depressed dear..
but yes..felt pretty much like a zombie and the outcome was this 😀
Nice poem…I especially like the rhyme and the subtle simplicity, Cheers!
thanks Arpita 🙂
glad you liked it… do keep visiting :)_
kiya re depress hai tou kiya cigg piyegi 😛
ramblings of a depressed mind huh!!! tu aur depress!!! beats me 😛
good one gal 😀
oi princess wo ciggy nai hai pencil hai 😐
saturday ko poori zombie thi.. 😀
What happens is that you write such a nice poem when it’s weekend and you have no plans…. but I think the idea of writing a poem certainly did excite you….
hey thanks Kalpesh… 🙂
sometimes.. the mind is so muddled and murky that you end up pouring out your thots..
in my case i jus rhyme them to make it a poem 😉
thanks for stopping by and i hope you keep visiting 😀
Wonderful! The picture was a perfect match for your poem.
“Nauseating, choking are the crowds..”
aawww…thaanks dear 🙂
glad you liked it 🙂
do keep visiting 🙂
Well written…this is so true….
Loved this poem…