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STUD But DUD..!!
Walking like a stud
Looking really dud
Collars pulled up
Hair all messed up
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Shades covering eyes
Thinks he’s cool as ice
Funky looking earring
Strides like a king
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Cellphone tring tring
Yellow colour bling
Low waist jeans
Proud peacock preens
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Messy grown stubble
Steps seemingly hobble
Acting like he’s hot
Sadly but he’s NOT
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Attitude needs a check
Well I don’t give a heck
Men like these don’t charm
So I have no qualms
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If you guys are wondering.. What… Where… How.. Why.. This poem…??
Well I happened to such a Stud-Dud today evening..
And the moment I saw him I felt this idiosyncratic urge to pen down a poem on him…
I’m doubly sure a dud like him is not gonna read this.. so I’m safe 😉
And as for you guys.. do lemme know how you found it 😀
Cos your comments are the oxygen to my Bloggy Body 
Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rocking..!!! Keep Blogging..!!!
Cheerios..!!
Megzone 
Oye sahi likha hian.. par ye hian kaun?
kyaaa pata.. station pe dikha tha ye nalayak…
itna dhakkan lag raha thaa..
yellow colour bling fone dekh ke tho i was like “how tacky” 😕
yeww….
Had to chuckle as I read this one…I see these guys come into the gym on a daily basis…you nailed the description…but forgot his tattoo. 🙂
lolz…no i dint notice any tattoo..
atleast it wasnt visible enuff..
martin he dint have a gymbody too 😉
he was pretty lean…
but the way he carried himself made me go “yew…tacckkyy..!! 😡 ”
haha funny!!
hate these wannabes.. nothing but air in their heads, they have such high opinion of themselves..
u nailed it right… bang on Pooja 😀
so much swagger in the walk..so much air about himself.. my oh my…
thanks for stopping by…
and do keep visiting…
lolzzz abb kisko victim bana diya tune 😀
hehehe funny write 😀
maine kahaan victim banaya…
wo tho laddoo ke tarah mere haathon mein aa gaya.. i mean shikaar ki tarah meri nazro mein aagaya..
ab aage peeche chalne walo ko dekhe bagair tho main chal tho nahi sakti princess… 😉
OMG!!Megz at it again! Patha nahin kaun hai woh bakra… jiska halaal ho raha hai yahan…
areee… main kkyaa karooonnn..
aise namune aa jayenge nazro ke saamne tho sigh..!! halaaal tho karna hi padega 😉
kkiiekkiieekkiiee
nice to be cool
as ice…
happy poem!
hey thanks Ji..
you are the sweetestest 😀
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/03/12/thursday-poets-rally-week-9-the-perfect-poet-award/
perfect poet again!
thank you.
yaaayyy……thanks Ji 😀
you made my day 😀
LOL cracking up. That’s pretty funny 🙂
sounds funny now..
Adam you shud have seen him…
he was such a “DUH..!!”
grosss…. 😕
thanks for writing in dear 🙂
Gosh!!! what a poem!!! And you should not worry, he wont read it… for one who has such a “thud” sense, its highly improbabale that he is into blogging ( meant only for the sophisticated and Shashi Tharoor).
llolzzz…thanks Abhi..
yeaa i knw one thing for a fact that..
duds like him wont blog.. nor wud they bother to read… 😉
they wud be busy putting on oodles of attitude and tryin their hand at flirting and impressing women online… crappos i say..!!
thanks for writing in dear.. do keep visitin 😀
Hey Meg, great poem! Made me laugh! 😀
Really catchy and yes, I think we’ve all met a Stud-Dud sometime, somewhere out there. You summed it up nicely. 😉
awww..thanks Gina…
eyyuuppp… when you start observing you realise there are so many genres of people around us.. and for a writer.. they all become specimens and guinneapigs.. sadly this Stud-Dud became mine 😉
thanks for writing in Gina..
i hope u keep visiting 😀
i’m a bit technically challenged sometimes.lol. have been trying to add you to my blogroll for the last 30 mins, unsuccessfully. lol. Think I’ve just worked it out though…getting there! 😉
Will definitely keep reading – Love your stuff Megz 😀
well written 🙂
I am scared to cross your path now 😛 you might just pen a poem about me 😉 hehhe
kya yaar… damage kar diyaa… 😦
i dint mean it that way 😳
i need to have a strong feeling of “anything” before i pen down a poem…
and sadly this fella simply gave me a very strong feeling of “YEW…YUCK” and hence i penned it down 😕
@gina..
awww.. Gina.. if you are using wordpress its really easy..
on the top of the page you might have sumthing called OPTIONS with a DROP DOWN.. there all you have to do is Select ADD TO BLOGROLL… 😉
incase its blogspot..err.. m technically challenged on that part 😉
hehehehehhhe….. finallyy.. wo studd-n-dudd ka likh dia tunee.. 😀 hahahahhaa
sahii likhaa haii meghuuu… perfeecctttt description.. 😛 for the duds who think they are studs… hahahahhahahaa
kkiieekkiieekkiiee
haan likh daaali….
control nai huaaaaa yaaar…
he was soooo tackkyy n yeww…!!!!
ha ha ha!!
i generally dont read poems but this was definitely different!!!
awwww…thanks dear…
i wud take that as a lovely compliment..
if i can influence a non-poem person to like my poems.. that means i really did write some sense 😉
thanks for writing in.. i hope you keep visiting 😀
Ha ha… Very nice!! had time to catch up . will try to be more regular!!
please do bro…
😉
glad you liked this 😀
hey that was grt….. you should post this poem to the stud….oops i mean the dud…. you saw that evening…after all he is source of inspiration…you must thank him….
well… ur right vishu,…
but then i wonder how his language and accent wud have been..
with all these attributes i wudnt be surprised if he looks at me as if im another demure-love-stricken damsel for him 🙄
but thanks for stopping and for your wonderful comments.. i hope you keep visiting… 🙂
Pretty nice play with words. Such posers can be found everywhere who think they are pretty cool. 🙂
hey thanks prateek..
thanks for stopping by and i hope you keep visiting 🙂