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Darling I wish you were here..??
Sky spattered with wispy clouds
My aching psyche, wails aloud
Evening glorious scented breeze
Dusking Sun makes my body freeze
Moon looks benign and near
Darling I wish you were hereβ¦
Chirpy birds returning to nest
Equivocal soul feeling depressed
Stars popping shining bright
Pandemonium amidst silent twilight
Demons of Darkness driving a fear
Darling I wish you were here
Tranquility spreads icy gloom
Melancholy steers towards his tomb
I stand pondering at divine conspiracies
Staring yonder, reliving our memories
Bleeding heart mutely trickles a tear
Darling I wish you were hereβ¦
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I hope you guys liked this one…
Do let me know your thoughts…!!
Thats all from Megzone for now…!!
Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rocking..!! Keep Blogging..!!
Cheerios..!
Well good .. His absence is personified..waiting for another poem where his presence will ..
lolzz….
there is now HIM/HIS/HE…
but im glad m a poet π
i get to wear various personality hats and wonder how people would be π
lovely!
awww….thanks dear… π
thannks for writing in.. i hope you keep visiting π
The image and the poem accentuate one another…a very pretty poem.
awww…thanks martin..
yes i did try to make sure the pic was in tune with the poem…
glad that it came out well..
thanks for writing in dear π
dreamy and romantic!
awwww….thanks nalini…
wondering when im gonna try my hand at haikus like u π
thanks for writing in dear:)
darling i wish you were here… aaaah i love the ending! melancholic indeed! i love it!
you so love melancholic poems dont u π
thanks dear… m glad you liked it…
thanks for writing in dear π
Six more months before the next football season ..
Darling I wish you were here …:)
lolzz.. righto hari π
good to see you on my blogspace..
thanks for writing in and i hope you keep visiting π
Nice one. Brought a tear..
awww…thanks dear π
smart and inviting!
Letting your loved one know what you think is an art,
you are the master of that art here!
Happy Sunday!
Jingle
awwwww…thannks Ji…
you always have encouraging and motivating words π
you are the sweetest π
wonderful… a surreal poem … π
The feel is pretty romantic and mushy..
hey Sush…
thanks so much buddy…
good to see you here too π
thanks for writing in dear π
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oi teri bolti kyu bandh ho gayi π
Megz, this is beautifully written. The feeling was heartfelt longing; yearning romance. π
awwww….thanks Gina…
that was really very very sweet of you…
im glad the feelings were well relayed…
thanks for writing in and do keep visitin dear π
lovely poem…the longing and the wait for her loved one is so beautifully reflected in your poem π
awwww….thanks dear…
glad the feelings reflected well…
thank you sooo much for writing in do keep visiting dear π
btw I want to follow your blog. There is no RSS feed anywhere…please let me know how to follow you.
aaainnngg… π―
but there was… and i even have a subscribe by email option π
wonder howcome ur not able to get it??
awesome. wonderful.
aawww…thank you trisha..
glad you liked it π
Vivid and so beautiful, emote through words, that’s what your poems are like, lovely!!! π
aaawww…thanks Dagny…
that was mighty sweet of you…
you are too generous with words… π