Banjar ~ Barren…!!


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This time its a Hindi Poem…

Ofcourse I have indeed provided the translation (this time no rhymes just literal translations πŸ˜‰ ) to all my non-hindi readers…

Please do let me know your thoughts..

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Banjar….


Banjar hai saari raahein…

Nahi kisi ka saath……

Banjar hai meri baahein……

Banjar hai mere haath……

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Sannate goonjte hai dil mein..

Jaise ho raha hai koi shor..

Nahi koi is mehfil mein..

Banjar hai, chaaro or..

.

Wahi galiyaa lag rahi anjan..

Chamakta nahi koi aab bhi..

NazreinΒ  ho gayi sunsaan..

Banjar hai mere khwab bhi..

.

Cheekh rahi dil ki zameen..

Tanhaai ka manzar hai..

Baras rahi ashko se nami..

Banjar hai sab banjar hai……!!!

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Now the translation of the above lines for my lovely audience πŸ˜€

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Barren….

Barren are all roads..

Isolation’s only company..

Barren are these arms..

Barren are my hands..

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Silence echoes in heart..

As if a cackling pandemonium..

No one in this environ..

Barren are all directions..

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Stranger, the old streets..

Bereft even of shining moon..

Desolateness in these eyes..

Barren, even my dreams..

.

Wails my heart’s terrain..

Loneliness encapsulates me..

Drenched in drizzling tears..

Barren, everythingβ€˜s barren……..

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I hope you guys liked this..

Do lemme know your thoughts cos they act as the blood for my heart.. πŸ˜‰

Thats it from Megzone for now..!!

Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rocking..!! Keep Blogging..!!

Cheerios..!! :mrgreen:

23 thoughts on “Banjar ~ Barren…!!

  1. Ravi says:

    What a dramatic departure from the stud-dud!And here you come with a thud.Ab kya kahein. Masth hai. Tumhara naam Meghana nahin,Kavitha hona chahiye tha πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜€ πŸ˜›

    • lolzz…itna thud tha kyaa budd… πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜›
      kkiieekkiieekkiiee :mrgreen:
      no no im happy with kavitha.. πŸ˜‰
      atleast its unique.. kavithaa is so commonh..
      why doesnt ravi try to be a kavi πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜€
      lolzz.. πŸ˜€

  2. Vidya says:

    Hey meghu..

    Awesome poetry!! didnt know you write so well.. Banjar touched my heart and i had a good laugh with stud-dud..

    Keep writing!
    Vidu

    • hey vidu… glad to see you on my blog-space… πŸ˜€
      imn truly completely sincerely astounded to see you here πŸ™‚
      but at the same time elated too πŸ˜€
      what an emotional cocktail im in πŸ˜€
      glad you liked it dear… πŸ˜€

  3. dustus says:

    Such an emotional poem. Love the transitional line “Stranger, the old streets…” Your poetry is awesome.

    Thanks πŸ™‚

    • aawww…thanks Adam..
      im actually glad that the translation did not take away the charm from the hindi poem…
      glad you liked it…
      thanks for writing in dear πŸ™‚

    • aawww… why are u chiding me 😦
      i thot u liked melancholic poems 😐
      i love blackk πŸ˜€
      isliye daala thaa.. koi aur dhangg ka theme hi nai hai 😦

  4. Good to know that there are people interested in the rich language of my country, and working hard to bring it on the world view. Cheers for your wonderful blog. Even I’m a published poet. You can catch glimpse of some of my works here- http://souravroy.com/poems/

    Keep Walking!!

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