This was yet another Poetic challenge thrown to me by a friend-blogger..
She wanted me to write a romantic poem of a couple out on an evening walk.. lost in themselves… and the following is the outcome..
Annd well.. I must say, the outcome is indeed beautiful… I do feel I have been able to do justice to her requirements….:)
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Hearts Enraptured…
Twilight time
Breeze sublime
Walk in the park
Soon wud be dark
Intertwined fingers
Silence lingers
Playing with hair
Senses ensnare
Enveloped arms
Fervorous charms
Spellbound in eyes
Passion reprise
Lost in our world
All mayhem slurred
Moments captured
Hearts Enraptured..!!
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I hope you guys liked this…!!
Do let me know your thoughts… 🙂
Keep Smiling..!! Keep Blogging..!! Keep Rocking..!!!
Cheerios…!!
Liked it. 🙂
hey thanks dear 🙂
Nice. 🙂
hey thanks Sudhi 🙂
hey that was lovely Meghana… really liked it.. 🙂
Cheers!
Tavish
Blog Link: Sensible Bakwas
awww…thanks Baba Tavishanand 😀
oops sorry forgot to refer you by your new name ‘meggie devi’ 😀
Challenge pe challenge paar karti ja beti :p hehehe lovely write.
lolzz…jaise aapka ashirwaad ho gurujeee 😀
tanik aur bhi koi challenges de de tho achha hota 😉
ideas ki thodi kami hai 😛
Wow.Beautiful. 🙂
awww….thanks re….
loving this and the effortless rhymes you have here 🙂
awww…thanks dear..
thank you for writing in and i hope you keep visiting 🙂
A very nice love poem….with a charming image.
aawww…thanks martin.. 🙂
m glad you liked it 🙂
thanks for writing in dear 🙂
I can barely see the words, but love the photo,
lovely and romantic!
Happy Friday!
awwww… Ji… 🙂
m glad you liked it 🙂
you are indeed the sweeetestestest 🙂
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/03/19/thursday-poets-rally-participants-of-week-10-an-award-for-you/
an award for week 10 efforts,
hope that you find one you like!
yaaayy…thanks Ji 🙂
i shall surely pick up one..
i think the Spring trust one 🙂
wow
iincredibly romantic.a successful poem.
awwww…thanks abder dear…
m glad you liked it 🙂
thanks for writing in dear 🙂
Love it! An award on my blog for you in the morning!
awwww… Suzi.. thank you sooooo much dear..
that was mighty sweet of you and yes a lovely surprise on a lazy saturday mornin 🙂
A beautiful poem as always
awwww..thanks sev..
glad it appealed to u too 🙂
thanks for writing in dear 🙂
oh the grand feelings of love… 🙂
aaahh… rightly said jaymie…
thanks for writing in dear..
i hope you keep visiting 😀
love is in the air!!!…uhuh….nice…:)
awww..thanks nalini 🙂
not sure if its in the air… but i do love poetic challenges 😀
thaanks for writing in dear 🙂
Beautiful and calm… Liked it
awww….thanks Ad…
thanks for writing in and i hope you keep visiting 😀
wonderful.
You nailed it, bravo!
Good really good job!!!! 😀