I Kissed Him…!!


hmmmm… this time its a little different kinda poem……

I just played around with a few words..

No sentence is more than 3 words long πŸ˜€

was a bit tough.. but sometimes I feel the lesser the words the more amplitude of effect they have…

~~~

I kissed him

Midnight glory

Scented air

Our love story

Caught unaware

.

Succulent love bite

Nape of the neck

Condescending yet trite

Fervorous peck

.

Passions arose

Breathlessly gasped

Broken repose

Hands enclasped

.

Heady feeling

Lights all dim

Overtly kneeling

I kissed him

~~~~

I hope you liked it.. Do let me know your thoughts…

Thats it from Megzone for now..!!

Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rocking..!! Keep Blogging..!!!

Cheerios…!! :mrgreen:

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47 thoughts on “I Kissed Him…!!

    • aiinngg… 😯
      i never said nape of the neck…
      the love bite was there.. the kiss-place wasnt mentioned πŸ˜‰
      and cos its a vampire poem it had to be nape of the neck πŸ˜›

  1. and thanx for providing with those very very easy rules of participating in Thursday poet rally. πŸ™‚ I followed it and i think m done!

  2. ha ha ha!!
    Nice!
    m generally not that much into poetry… but this one was short, simple and above all easy to understand for poetry-poors like me!!!

    Regards

    • aawww..thanks azad…. i gues this is the second time you have said that πŸ™‚
      the last one was tongue twister i beleive πŸ™‚
      glad to see you here πŸ™‚
      and thanks a bunch for those wonderful words..
      i hope you keep visiting πŸ™‚

      • seriously..
        i am not that mch into poems (always failed when i was a kid).
        I only like selected hindi poems by Dinkar or Bacchan and English poetry generally fails to grasp my attention.

        Yes this is the second time i said this.

        Will look out for more! πŸ™‚

    • awwww..thanks Saurabh…
      naah naah.. when it was a vampiress on her prowl how could i have put up a better pic than this πŸ˜€

      /I see what I was missing all these days!/
      wo kehte hai naa
      der aaye durust aaye πŸ˜‰
      aap aaye tho sahi.. wahi kaafi hai πŸ˜€

  3. Oohhh La La!!!
    great one megz.. i like it..
    though i was anticipating something different – personal…
    u always take me by surprise.. cool!!!

  4. dustus says:

    You’re a really talented poet. i feel like you can be given any topic and transform it into poetic magic. Cheerios πŸ™‚

    • lolzz.. your pretty much right Adam..
      many have my friends have actually tried givin me challenges to try and deter me from writing poetrry..
      but somehow i manage to scrap through..
      thanks dear.. πŸ™‚

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