hmmmm… this time its a little different kinda poem……
I just played around with a few words..
No sentence is more than 3 words long 😀
was a bit tough.. but sometimes I feel the lesser the words the more amplitude of effect they have…
I kissed him
Our love story
Succulent love bite
Nape of the neck
Condescending yet trite
Lights all dim
I kissed him
I hope you liked it.. Do let me know your thoughts…
Thats it from Megzone for now..!!
Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rocking..!! Keep Blogging..!!!
47 thoughts on “I Kissed Him…!!”
good attempt! nice one!
thanks di 🙂
Kiss y at the nape of d neck……
It was a good poem, even thou its at the nape…. I liked it….
i never said nape of the neck…
the love bite was there.. the kiss-place wasnt mentioned 😉
and cos its a vampire poem it had to be nape of the neck 😛
and thanx for providing with those very very easy rules of participating in Thursday poet rally. 🙂 I followed it and i think m done!
wwooowww..kewl.. all the best 😀
and i hope you participate in all future rallys too 😀
well done megzone.romantic and passionate
well and killer too 😉
Very nicely done….just love how much you got into such few works…kudos!
that was really very sweet of you 🙂
One to embrass with passion! 🙂 Have a Fun Friday! 🙂
happy friday you too doraz.. 😀
thanks for writing in 🙂
i thot so dear 😉
thanks for the correction and thanks for liking it too 😀
do keep visiting 😀
Nice poem..quite passionate and seductive 😛
awwww….thanks dear 🙂
passionate seductive and killer too 😉
ha ha ha!!
m generally not that much into poetry… but this one was short, simple and above all easy to understand for poetry-poors like me!!!
aawww..thanks azad…. i gues this is the second time you have said that 🙂
the last one was tongue twister i beleive 🙂
glad to see you here 🙂
and thanks a bunch for those wonderful words..
i hope you keep visiting 🙂
i am not that mch into poems (always failed when i was a kid).
I only like selected hindi poems by Dinkar or Bacchan and English poetry generally fails to grasp my attention.
Yes this is the second time i said this.
Will look out for more! 🙂
that has been the shortest ever comment from you..
thank you soo much 😀
awww…thanks dear pallav 🙂
good to see you in my blog posts again 🙂
do keep visiting 🙂
embrace is cool,
kiss is sweet,
you are the sweetest poet!
aawwwwww……..thanks Jingle you are the sweeetest 😀
Whoa! Nice one!
You just proved ‘lesser the words, more the amplitude…’
The pic would have done better at the bottom, don’t you think?
I see what I was missing all these days!
naah naah.. when it was a vampiress on her prowl how could i have put up a better pic than this 😀
/I see what I was missing all these days!/
wo kehte hai naa
der aaye durust aaye 😉
aap aaye tho sahi.. wahi kaafi hai 😀
That pic….shit…. the poem….ossum!!!
and thanks for visitng again 😀
nice vampiress romance i bleive 😛
Oohhh La La!!!
great one megz.. i like it..
though i was anticipating something different – personal…
u always take me by surprise.. cool!!!
aahhh… nice try.. personal mein kuch hota tho likhti yaar…
yaha tho bas sab banjar hi banjar 😉
You’re a really talented poet. i feel like you can be given any topic and transform it into poetic magic. Cheerios 🙂
lolzz.. your pretty much right Adam..
many have my friends have actually tried givin me challenges to try and deter me from writing poetrry..
but somehow i manage to scrap through..
thanks dear.. 🙂
Wow! – kiss of death – brilliantly portrayed!
thanks DISH 😀
nice- really nice description..
awww…thanks dear 🙂
wow !! loved it !!
thanks dear 😀
…… i dunno wat to say….
I don’t have any other word to describe it…
I would love to read more of you..
cute yet sensuous..:)
nice one hear my gadget speak
Quiet sweet actually. Loved the poem. And yes, I do agree lesser words conveying broader meaning works superbly 🙂 Cheers!
The essence and the intensity… the words say it all 🙂
wohoo one on vampire romance 😉 seems this will never go out of season 😀 Good one i liked reading it