hmmmm… this time its a little different kinda poem……
I just played around with a few words..
No sentence is more than 3 words long 😀
was a bit tough.. but sometimes I feel the lesser the words the more amplitude of effect they have…
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I kissed him
Midnight glory
Scented air
Our love story
Caught unaware
.
Succulent love bite
Nape of the neck
Condescending yet trite
Fervorous peck
.
Passions arose
Breathlessly gasped
Broken repose
Hands enclasped
.
Heady feeling
Lights all dim
Overtly kneeling
I kissed him
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I hope you liked it.. Do let me know your thoughts…
Thats it from Megzone for now..!!
Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rocking..!! Keep Blogging..!!!
Cheerios…!! 
Megzone 
good attempt! nice one!
thanks di 🙂
Kiss y at the nape of d neck……
It was a good poem, even thou its at the nape…. I liked it….
aiinngg… 😯
i never said nape of the neck…
the love bite was there.. the kiss-place wasnt mentioned 😉
and cos its a vampire poem it had to be nape of the neck 😛
and thanx for providing with those very very easy rules of participating in Thursday poet rally. 🙂 I followed it and i think m done!
wwooowww..kewl.. all the best 😀
and i hope you participate in all future rallys too 😀
well done megzone.romantic and passionate
aawww…thanks abder..
well and killer too 😉
Very nicely done….just love how much you got into such few works…kudos!
aawww….thanks martin..
that was really very sweet of you 🙂
One to embrass with passion! 🙂 Have a Fun Friday! 🙂
happy friday you too doraz.. 😀
thanks for writing in 🙂
embrace….oooops! 🙂
i thot so dear 😉
thanks for the correction and thanks for liking it too 😀
do keep visiting 😀
Nice poem..quite passionate and seductive 😛
awwww….thanks dear 🙂
passionate seductive and killer too 😉
ha ha ha!!
Nice!
m generally not that much into poetry… but this one was short, simple and above all easy to understand for poetry-poors like me!!!
Regards
aawww..thanks azad…. i gues this is the second time you have said that 🙂
the last one was tongue twister i beleive 🙂
glad to see you here 🙂
and thanks a bunch for those wonderful words..
i hope you keep visiting 🙂
seriously..
i am not that mch into poems (always failed when i was a kid).
I only like selected hindi poems by Dinkar or Bacchan and English poetry generally fails to grasp my attention.
Yes this is the second time i said this.
Will look out for more! 🙂
HOT!
awww..thanks nalini..
that has been the shortest ever comment from you..
thank you soo much 😀
Amazing 🙂
awww…thanks dear pallav 🙂
good to see you in my blog posts again 🙂
do keep visiting 🙂
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embrace is cool,
kiss is sweet,
Happy Friday!
you are the sweetest poet!
aawwwwww……..thanks Jingle you are the sweeetest 😀
Whoa! Nice one!
You just proved ‘lesser the words, more the amplitude…’
The pic would have done better at the bottom, don’t you think?
I see what I was missing all these days!
awwww..thanks Saurabh…
naah naah.. when it was a vampiress on her prowl how could i have put up a better pic than this 😀
/I see what I was missing all these days!/
wo kehte hai naa
der aaye durust aaye 😉
aap aaye tho sahi.. wahi kaafi hai 😀
That pic….shit…. the poem….ossum!!!
aaww…thanks Sid..
and thanks for visitng again 😀
nice vampiress romance i bleive 😛
Oohhh La La!!!
great one megz.. i like it..
though i was anticipating something different – personal…
u always take me by surprise.. cool!!!
kkiieekkiieekkiiee
aahhh… nice try.. personal mein kuch hota tho likhti yaar…
yaha tho bas sab banjar hi banjar 😉
You’re a really talented poet. i feel like you can be given any topic and transform it into poetic magic. Cheerios 🙂
lolzz.. your pretty much right Adam..
many have my friends have actually tried givin me challenges to try and deter me from writing poetrry..
but somehow i manage to scrap through..
thanks dear.. 🙂
Wow! – kiss of death – brilliantly portrayed!
heeheheeh
thanks DISH 😀
nice- really nice description..
awww…thanks dear 🙂
wow !! loved it !!
thanks dear 😀
…… i dunno wat to say….
Ohooooo!!!!!!
“Ah!”
I don’t have any other word to describe it…
Beautifully done!
I would love to read more of you..
Blog:GvSparx
Twitter:@GvSparx
cute yet sensuous..:)
nice one hear my gadget speak
Quiet sweet actually. Loved the poem. And yes, I do agree lesser words conveying broader meaning works superbly 🙂 Cheers!
The essence and the intensity… the words say it all 🙂
good one
very nice
wohoo one on vampire romance 😉 seems this will never go out of season 😀 Good one i liked reading it