Thursday Poets Rally ~ SUICIDE


This week as usual I am posting the poem one full day in advance…. πŸ˜€

Why simply cos I feel so… πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜€ πŸ˜†

Every Thursday Jingle hosts a Poets Rally at her blog

You too can participate if you are an avid poet and would like to pitch in.. All you need to do is let Jingle know at the following thread

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/03/31/thursday-poets-rally-week-12-april-1-7-2010/

the following is my humble offering to this week’s poets rally….. πŸ˜€

So here we go..

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Princess our darling Raji is known for her awes-inspiring jaw-hanging nerve-wrecking art at shape poetry..

Raji is a very dear friend and fellow blogger… She inspires me with her poetry and encourages and motivates me to continouosly re-invent my style and my poetry… Hence in many ways I call her my teacher/guru/mentor…

But today.. she has compelled me to commit suicide… her latest offering of Shape Poetry rendered me and my mind useless…… 😦

So if at all you guys Β find my body.. do blame it on RAJI…. πŸ˜€

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oh well I tried to create a noose.. I wonder if it looks like one… 😦

I hope you guys doΒ realizeΒ now why I am committing suicide..

I cant ever match her shaping skills… πŸ˜₯

Sigh..!!! I am DEAD… 😦

Now i think we need to start a DEAD POETS RALLY also 😈

there are some awards that i need to accept and award which will take a complete dedicated post tomorrow..

thats it from megzone for now πŸ™‚

Keep Smiling..!!! Keep Rocking..!! Keep Blogging..!!

Cheerios..!! :mrgreen:




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51 thoughts on “Thursday Poets Rally ~ SUICIDE

  1. what suicide , human life is so very sweetly short , that people actually commit thnking of suicide for the most silliest of reasons . So what if words dont rhyme , what if Raji writes better. You are more frequent and more stupid , the way I love it , the way I like it , the way I adore it . Okay you are not so stupid , and you even rhyme so beautifully . but as always , the greatest of talent is always in doubt ! I have but no doubt , that you are the the most beautiful ,great , frequently genuine and compulsive poetress out there . only you ….are not available …on a sunday afternoon as you have class …

    • oohhhh gawwdd…!!! do you always have to be so incorrigible..
      and dude for god sake grow up it was jus a dig at Raji all in good zest πŸ˜€
      stooppppp freaakkiinnggg outtttt… 😑

  2. Dishit says:

    lolzzz – what an idea sirji – but seriously both of your poetries is beyond compare! – for even a celebrated poet would find it difficult to write poems daily ans maintain the quality…. πŸ™‚

    • kkiieekkiieekiiiee :mrgreen:

      areeeee her shape poetry seriously make me go chullu bhar paani mein doob marna.. 😦
      shes is simply marvelous and to match her is no easy game..
      sigh..!!! for now.. i jus tried.. thankiiessss that you liked it πŸ˜€

      ppssttt…. im still waiting fr that alert πŸ˜‰

  3. Fantastic. Raj is the queen of shape poetry, and you too have made a brilliant piece.

    i cant open raj’s blogspot site from my pc 😦 the internete explorer crashes every time i try.

    well, that should have been a garland, you deserve a garland and a crown not a noose.

    • OH my..!!! trisha you always are generous with words dear πŸ™‚
      Raji is indeed the Queen of shape poetry.. πŸ™‚
      uh oh 😦
      trisha.. if you are on Facebook.. there is an option for networked blogs.. from therein you can try reading her posts..
      just a suggestion do try πŸ™‚

  4. awwwww haiiiii mere liye… haii mai mar java πŸ˜€ … πŸ˜€ .. πŸ˜€
    arey yaar tu jis rate se poem likhti hai mai bhi aise him schoked ho jati hu … πŸ˜€ masta poem and i love it of course πŸ˜€
    dead poet’s rally// lolzzzzz πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ tu aur tere ides πŸ˜›
    its great to have you as friend dear πŸ™‚

    • hayyeee.. meri princess aagayi tum πŸ™‚
      haaan ye poora poetic dedication sirf tumhare liye πŸ™‚

      tum tho sird shock ho jaati ho.. mera tho tum suicide karwaati ho uska kyaa πŸ˜›

      /tu aur tere ides/
      kyaa kare insanity koot koot ke bhari hai:P

      /its great to have you as friend dear /
      the pleasure and honour is all mine dear πŸ™‚

  5. superb one,….. by the way, who is this princess? zara humse bhi intro-shintro karao yaar… lolz jus kidding…..
    was a awesome poem with superb artistic touch to tat….
    and Dead poets rally….. off course….. y not i support u for tat…. but plz pehela dead poet award mujhe he dena haan….. the one and only contender… Vishu …. vishu…..

    • oi tuje princess nai pata πŸ™„
      ur craziiieee… she writes the best shape poetry ever.. meri guru hai wo..
      upar link diya hai check kar.. she is from the rally too πŸ™‚
      Rajlakshmi is her name πŸ˜€

      dead poets rally… hmmm.. now u are really giving me ideas πŸ˜€ πŸ˜‰
      sochti hoon..

    • aaawww… thanks dear…
      well.. you should pay Raji’s blog a visit..
      it would be then that you would realise what awesomely breath-taking poetry she creates πŸ™‚
      and the reason why i said suicide πŸ˜€

    • awww..thanks dear emmanuel..
      shape poetry is really an awesome form of poetry…
      you can either merge the lines over a pic.. or arrange the words in such a way that it creates an image..
      thts what i have tried doing here.. and i have shown here both the forms of shape poetry..
      thanks for liking it and writing in dear.. i hope you keep visiting..

  6. Most definitely different. I enjoy shaped poems, I think I’ll have to be brave and try a new genre now I’ve seen you’ve been brave enough to have a go. Thanks for your comments πŸ™‚

    • awwww…thanks Shanellis… welcome to megzone..
      im glad you liked the poems…
      yes yes.. please do try and let me know.. i shall only be happy to see more people indulging in this πŸ˜€

    • awww…thanks dear Slintuli..
      hey we can surely shake hands..virtual hands are always there πŸ™‚
      and i would love to be in your association..
      thank you sooo much dear.. m glad you liked it πŸ™‚

  7. Hey thanks for stopping by.
    I like the noose version better than the picture. The gun is too real and depressing for a poetic suicide. I wrote one visual poem, it was for a class and I was stressing out. My dad says to me, “Just write about the moon in the shape of a circle.” lol so that’s what I did, but it turned out really sweet. Poetic suicide is an interesting concept, because it’s neither the autor, not the words themselves, but the actual poem.
    cool.

    • heyy…thanks dear.. for stopping by… and welcome to megzone..
      aaah…the moon is one part of the nature that never ceases to wonder me…
      i can keep staring at it and never tire… i love the moon..

      aah yes.. i knew i cudnt commit suicide cos im not tht coward.. i cant let my words commit suicide cos i love them too much πŸ˜€
      and so let the poem do it πŸ˜€
      thanks for writing in dear and i hope you keep visiting.. πŸ™‚

  8. You crack me up!!!! I think it was a noose πŸ™‚ !! Thanks for your comment,but I didn’t write poem with the hershey kisses Vi wrote it for me!!! You’re such fun πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ I think we’re doing “Happy Easter” now. I don’t feel good enough to fix misspelled words,please let me slide!!! πŸ˜€
    Luv “U”

    • ooppssiiee daisiess… 😳
      i goofed up on who wrote for whom 😦
      m such a nut case 😳
      thanks for writing in Pat… it feels great to have you on my space πŸ™‚

  9. Dearest Meg,

    I’m sure if you tried to commit poetic suicide, they’d be lined up around the block volunteering to give you mouth-to-mouth and bring you back.

    You did quite well. I think I will have to try one of these shape poems.

    Did you know April is national poetry month? I’m going to write 30 poems in 30 days to celebrate. Why don’t you join me? Invite as many people as you like to do the same!

    • awww…keira… you are soooo sweeett πŸ™‚

      oh please do try these shape poetry.. πŸ™‚

      aaah national poetry month.. sounds interesting.. but i wonder if i will be able to concoct 30 poems for all the 30days.. πŸ™„
      i shall surely try thoough πŸ™‚
      thanks dearest kiera πŸ™‚

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