Wondering are you..
What the title means..
Proud peacock preens..
I went shopping today..
Only to see men at play..
Low rise jeans..
Attitude reigns..
Neck layered chains..
Brawny with no brains..
Red coloured beard..
My poor eyes seared..
Head coloured streaks..
Yuck!!! All of them freaks..
Tight tees & perfumed skin..
Poor my head asked aspirin..
Purple coloured shades..
Haircuts in blades..
Collars up, shirts unbuttoned..
Bare chested as I stared stunned..
Accented talks, attract attention..
Swagger in walks definitely a mention..
Trying their bests to look like studs..
But as usual all of them duds..
Acting as if they own the world..
Here βs where their realities unfurl..
Fashion quotient needs a check..
Mind & soul all in a wreck..
Spiked cock like hair..
My poor soul couldnβt bear..
Yes I enjoyed my shopping spree..
So many sample pieces to see..
Cock a doodle doo..
Still wondering are you..??
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I guess the poem says it all… π
Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rocking..!! Keep Blogging..!!
Cheerios..!!
You’d gone to shop for guys kya?
Clothes ke baare mein kuch nahi likha…
Ladko ko hi dekhti rahi na tu?
muhaahahaaahaahaa π
gayi tho thi shopping karne… kiya bhi..
lekin aise sample pieces se nazre kaise chupaoo..
tu dekhta tho tu bhi likh deta π
kaise kaise the re baba.. aankho ke saamne koi aa jaaye tho aankhein bandh thode hi karte hai π
Your “poor eyes seared” and your “head asked aspirin” lol Very funny lines.
awww…thanks Adam..
but trust me with the kinds that i saw yesterday.. brrrr.. i wonder how their gals react to their idiocy..err.. if they have any gals that is π
lol… shoppng karne gayi thi ya ladko ko analyze karne? Lagta hai mujhe bhi sarri ladkiyon ke bare mien ek aise hi poem likhni padegi… kyan bolti hai? likhdoon? π
heehehehee π
main kya karoon aise namoone mere hi aankho ke saamne aa tapakte hai π
ab upar wale ne aankhein di hai tho dost.. dekhna tho padega naa..
aur aise fataakebaaz ko dekhke likhu nahi aisa ho sakta hai kyaa π
waise tuje bhi aise sample dikh jaye tho likh naa..
mana kisne kiya hai π
aree bindaas π
Oh! nice one π
awww..thanks pallav dear… π
that was sweet of you π
Cock a doodle doo..
Wondering are you..
What the title means..
Proud peacock preens..
loved the opening so much,
fun poem packed with wit!
Happy Easter!
π
You rock!
awww…thanks Ji..
im glad you liked it π
thankk you soooooo much π
U read my mind, they are every where these days its like an epidemic and I love the vivid description, had a hearty laugh π
whooaa..!!! now thats something..
is this wat they call TELEPATHY π
aaww..thanks dear.. glad to know you liked them π
thanks for writing in and i hope you keep visiting π
ha. fun poem…guess i better change my haircut…lol. jk.
awww..brian dear.. im sure u wont look this weird at all π
these are jus some wacy weirdo wannabes π
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/06/the-celebrate-poet-of-march-award-announcement-for-nominations/
have fun!
awww… Ji will surely try to nominate π