Ok this was an instant poetry that hit my head…
One of my colleagues and very close friend is as of now in Zurich on an official assignment..
Since the days of YashRaj movies I have been fascinated by Swiss.. I simply love the snow.. the valleys everything…
albeit all i knw of the place is what i have seen on tv and movies…
So since he was there.. i have been bugging him to send me pics.. and well.. finally he did yield and send me some,..
the moment Β i laid my eyes on this particular pic it triggered an inspiration to write a poetry..
and tadaaaaaa…. the following is the result of 10mins… π
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Bereft…!!!
Bereft of colors
Bereft of leaves
Bereft of feelings
Nothing relieves
.
Bereft of love
Bereft of passion
Bereft of ardor
And even compassion
.
Bereft are my barks
Bereft of even insects
Bereft are these branches
My affliction reflects
.
Bereft is my life
Where nothing exists
Bereft of everything
Resembling deep abyss
.
Survived all odds
Yet all thatβs left
Is a flickering hope
Whilst I stand bereft
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I hope you guys liked this… and I hope I was able to do justice to that lovely tree there π
Do lemme know your thoughts..
Thats it from Megzone for now..!
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aawww…thanks Krish π
hi , thanks megzone for the lovely poem; some pictures can trigger off an extraordinary poetic overflow of feelings .well done .
aawww…abder thank you very much…
yess so very true….
some pictures can act as an inspiration.. i mean such that the moment you see them they trigger your poetic juices to flow.. π
thanks for writing in dear π
heyy ……..this is soo soo beautiful…n amazing ….n what not *m so short of words* beautiful it is … !!
hey welcome to megzone…
awww..thannks vidhi.. that was really very sweet of you… π
thanks for writing in and i hope you keep visiting π
Nice Poem.. π
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well done!
aawww…thanks Nalini…
feels great to have you here π
thanks for writing in and i hope you keep visitin… π
beautiful..
heyyyy thanks pooja π
glad to know you liked it…thanks for writing in dear and i hope you keep visiting π
overwhelming,stupefying……
m bereft of words…..
aaaww…. thanks krups π
that was soooooo sweeeetttt of you π
I am impressed…a poem just after looking at a picture….wow
lovely π
aaww….thank you sooooo much dear π
yes.. actually the moment i saw the pic the first word that struck me was bereft..
and from that.. thoughts just flowed and words kept coming on..
Quite amazing lines, Megz! Nice flow and fits the pic well, though I do like the way the sunlight brings out the green of the tree tops. Deep poem.
cheerios
aawww…thanks Adam dear π
aahh yes i did like that too.. but somehow the bereftness of the tree captured my attention π
thankf for writing in dear π
Very nice, Megz and I hope one day you will be in Switzerland to enjoy it. It is nothing but AWESOME!
hugs
shakira
aawww….thank you so much shakira dear π
i hope i get to experience the beauty of that place too π
thanks you so much for writing in π
all because of a tree… wow.. a job well done!!!
aawww…..thanks dear moondai..
yes yes all because of the tree π
cool post!
aaww…Ji thank you π
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/12/ready-or-not-here-it-is-poetry-awards-for-march/
You win,
Happy Monday!
aaww…. Ji thank you soooo much..
you are the sweetest π