The sweeetest Jingle conducts a Poets Rally every thursday at her blog.
So if you are a poet and love poetry and would like to share a whole new world and connect with other poets across the globe.. this is one place to do it…
Simply visit Jingle at her blog
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/14/thursday-poets-rally-week-14-april-15-212010/ leave a comment Β and sweet that she is she Β would welcome you with open arms…
For rules and other details do visit Jingle’s Blog…. π
This is my entry to this week’s Poets Rally…
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Broken mirror
Torn forlorn
She lay lovelorn
Images fuzzy
Thoughts muzzy
Mind frayed
Feelings betrayed
Emotions furor
Tumultuous uproar
Heartβs mourn
Psyche sojourn
Divine conspiracies
Tattered memories
Destiny Queerer
Resemble broken mirrorβ¦
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Thats it from Megzone for now..!!
I hope you enjoyed the poem do leave your wonderful comments here π
Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rocking..!! Keep Blogging..!!
Cheerios..!!
You rock, and so do your verses!
aaww…thanks VI π
wonderful verses.. π Each word beautifully carries the emotions.. π
aawww….thankkkiiiesss π
Beautifully written..:)
Marinela x
aawww….thankkssss π
wah wah….. chotu chotu lines….:P
awww…thankiess..
haan chotu chotu lines mein impact zyada hota hai naa :d
a lovely one π
aaw…thanks dear..
welcome to megzone..thanks for stopping by and i hope you keep visiting π
Loved it…sweet & simple!!
oihoi..thanks DUDE π
a lovely poem with nice rhyming, well chosen words and the sad, heartbroken tone is well delivered.well done megzone.
aawww…thanks Abder .. π
thanks for stopping by and im glad you liked it π
The rapid line breaks make this read like a succession of gunshots
BANG
BANG
BANG
It totally works with the subject… fantastic.
aaww… kiera you always have the choicest words for me π
i feel so honoured with your comments..
thank you soooo much dear π
I love how stream of consciousness yet still so very precise this is
aawww…thanks dear π
glad to knw you liked it π
Sadness and pain. well written.
Gerardine
aaww..thanks dear gerardine π
i like this one a lot
hey thanks Sev π
glad to know you liked it π
powerful!
π
aaww…thanks JI π
Beautiful and broken……Wahhh!
tat was fantastic…. jus the poem i needed for the situation…..
oi why why watt happ to u
why perfect fr ur situation…
enna pa aachu??
waise m glad you liked it but π
Aise he i m kinda liking broken heart sady saddy poetry nowadays…..
Great poem with a perfect pic!
aawww…thanks Jaymie.. π
Hi, Nice stream & thanks for your visit.
hey welcome to Megzone Irene π
thanks for writing in and i hope you keep visitin π
This is great! Loved the pic!!!
~warriorpoetess
aaww…thanks dear π
glad to know you liked it π
Vanity
no anna not vanity in this case π
its a broken heart π
fantastic, really enjoyed this cheers Pete
welcome to megzone dear Pete π
glad to know you enjoyed it..
thanks for writing in and i hope you keep visiting π
Beautiful! And powerful too!
aawww..thanks dear shilpa π
Picture Perfect!!!!
Luv ya!!!!
aaww..thanks dear π
Its amazing how poets work out their way from something broken π
simply loved it,,and a very nice pic too
aaww…thanks divyanshu,…
its great to see you back with your lovely comments π
well the pic was the inspiration for the poem though…
thats really cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
aawww…thanks Trisha
lovely..
aawww..thanks dear π
good to see you back in my space π
beautiful words and beautiful composition.
Nice One