yeppiesss m back again with the Thursday Poets Rally Poem..
a whole day in advance..
areeee cos i feel like 😛
simple 😀
Sweet jingle hosts Thursday Poets rally at her blog
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/21/thursday-poets-rally-week-15-april-22-28-2010/
If you are a poet and very much interested in posting poetry every thursday you too can join in …
Visit the above post for more info..
Also this rally opens up a plethora of poets you would not otherwise meet…
Jingle has also been very sweet and kind enough to present me the following awards.. 🙂
thank you sooo much sweet jingle 🙂
So here’s my Poem for the week…
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Muddled Mind..
Muddled Mind..
Destiny Unkind..
Restless Soul..
No control..
Chaotic Thoughts..
Cacophonic blots..
Humdrum Existence..
Lost all sense..
Caught in a chasm..
Shadowy phantasm…
Nullity and void..
Loveless Devoid…
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i hope you enjoyed this poetry… do let me know your thoughts by commenting herein.. 🙂
Thats it from Megzone for now..
Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rocking..!! Keep Blogging..!!
Cheerios..!! 
Megzone 
less is more – well said
thanks dear pete..
welcome to megzone and i hope you keep visiting 🙂
well you have put us in a very chilly place with that one…simple yet is makes the mind spin…
LOl…thanks dear brian 🙂
ws waitin for ur poem…
u rock!!!!
oi hoi
dil garden garden kar diya oi 😀
Awesome! Title, related pic and awesome wording! 🙂 loved poem dear!
oi hoi …thanks dear 🙂
glad you liked it 🙂
“Lost all sense..
Caught in a chasm..”
These two lines differ from the rest. Kinda spoil the charm of the poem 😦
aawww…thanks dear 🙂
point noted sirjee..
but i wonder why you feel so??
Because their meaning is a bit different. They appear to be past tense sentences.
Like… I find ‘All senses lost’ closer to the poem’s overall style than ‘Lost all sense’.
Getting it?
I’m not an expert on this. I just tried to give a candid feedback.
And, please don’t call me ‘sir’. Abhi to main bachcha hoon :sigh:
Your poem expresses a lot through your chosen words, very meaningful and deep. Don’t despair; chaos will eventaully clear.
aawww…thanks dear LUNA 🙂
sweet of you to stop by.. i hope the chaos clears too 🙂
thanks for writing in and i hope you keep visitin 😀
kiya baat hai thorta sad sad poem likha…
loved the structure… well written 🙂
oi hoi
thanks princessy 😀
meri gurujee 😀
gr8.. 🙂 nice… and check out my blog to read the new poem.. and even comment on it 😉 and other posts too 😉
thanks dear phalgunn… 🙂
i shall surely visit and leave a comment 🙂
thanks for writing in dear 🙂
I like the development of this piece. It keeps the reader glued to the end. Though it revolves aroound “voidness” Well written!
Best regards,
Viny
aaww…thanks dear viny..
that was really very sweet of you..
thanks for writing in and i hope you keep visitin 🙂
the rhyming and the word assonance are great.well done megzone.
hey thanks dear abder 🙂
playful,
sometimes you mean no harm,
but I take the cheers
and thank you for the contribution!
Best wishes!
let me know after you have done your commenting!
aaiinngg.. Ji i thot i did all the comments 😐
have a missed some??
good job meg– ^O^
thanks dear 🙂
wow…u hav writen down ur state of mind in such less words..!!
thnx 4 commenting…would love 2 cum here again!!
aaawww…thanks dear sakhi 🙂
thats very sweet of you…
thanks for writing in and i hope you keep visitin 😀
You’ve described ME! This is exactly how I’ve been feeling lately..
Wow! Nice one..
aaww.. pooji same pinch 😀
Wonderful wording. I feel the words like they were pouring out of me onto my own computer screen. Well done!
ANd thanks for the input and inclusion of my blog!
aawww… thanks Kara…
oohh you too.. 😀
why is everyone in this frame of mind.. is it the weather.. i thot it was jus me… 🙄
the words complement the picture An art work! 🙂
aaawww…thansk Moondai 🙂
that was really very sweet of you.. 🙂
thanks for writing in dear.. and i hope you keep visiting 😀
I love the artwork that accompanies this poem. I also like the economy of words and word choices. They work perfectly together.
When I read the two words “existence” and “sense” it seemed they would flow better with “existence” and “senses.” My mind just automatically read it that way, so I thought I would suggest it.
Thank you for stopping by my blog and leaving a comment. I really appreciate it 🙂
aawww…thansk dear Sarah.. taht was really very sweet of you.. 🙂
yep i guess haresh was tryin to point out the same..
thank you guys so much for taking so much interest in the poems 😀
thansk for writng in dear.. and i hope you keep visitin 😀
a nice pace, with deep and touching sentiments. Thanks!
aawww…thanks dear BFG 🙂
that was very sweet of you 🙂
thanks for stopping by and i hope you keep visiting 😀
simply fantastic playground of words. 🙂
aawwww…thanks Trisha.. thats very sweet of you 🙂
thanks you soooo much dear 🙂
Beautifully carved out ..am i using the right expression ,,,,
chado yaar..
bhavnao ko samjho..:D
check out mine at
http://blog.divyanshu.net/2010/04/thursday-poets-rally/
woowwiiieeee……!!!!!1
glad am i that you joined in 🙂
welcome aboard mate…
lookin fwd to ur poetry every thursday…
and yep jus abt in my way to ur blog 😀