Thursday Poets Rally ~Muddled Mind…!!


yeppiesss m back again with the Thursday Poets Rally Poem..

a whole day in advance..

areeee cos i feel like πŸ˜›

simple πŸ˜€

Sweet jingle hosts Thursday Poets rally at her blog

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/21/thursday-poets-rally-week-15-april-22-28-2010/

If you are a poet and very much interested in posting poetry every thursday you too can join in …

Visit the above post for more info..

Also this rally opens up a plethora of poets you would not otherwise meet…

Jingle has also been very sweet and kind enough to present me the following awards.. πŸ™‚

thank you sooo much sweet jingle πŸ™‚

So here’s my Poem for the week…

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Muddled Mind..


Muddled Mind..

Destiny Unkind..

Restless Soul..

No control..

Chaotic Thoughts..

Cacophonic blots..

Humdrum Existence..

Lost all sense..

Caught in a chasm..

Shadowy phantasm…

Nullity and void..

Loveless Devoid…

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i hope you enjoyed this poetry… do let me know your thoughts by commenting herein.. πŸ™‚

Thats it from Megzone for now..

Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rocking..!! Keep Blogging..!!

Cheerios..!! :mrgreen:

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42 thoughts on “Thursday Poets Rally ~Muddled Mind…!!

      • Because their meaning is a bit different. They appear to be past tense sentences.

        Like… I find ‘All senses lost’ closer to the poem’s overall style than ‘Lost all sense’.

        Getting it?

        I’m not an expert on this. I just tried to give a candid feedback.

        And, please don’t call me ‘sir’. Abhi to main bachcha hoon :sigh:

    • aawww…thanks dear LUNA πŸ™‚
      sweet of you to stop by.. i hope the chaos clears too πŸ™‚

      thanks for writing in and i hope you keep visitin πŸ˜€

  1. Phalgunn Maharishi says:

    gr8.. πŸ™‚ nice… and check out my blog to read the new poem.. and even comment on it πŸ˜‰ and other posts too πŸ˜‰

  2. Viny says:

    I like the development of this piece. It keeps the reader glued to the end. Though it revolves aroound “voidness” Well written!

    Best regards,
    Viny

  3. Ji says:

    playful,
    sometimes you mean no harm,
    but I take the cheers
    and thank you for the contribution!

    Best wishes!

    let me know after you have done your commenting!

  4. Kara Douglas says:

    Wonderful wording. I feel the words like they were pouring out of me onto my own computer screen. Well done!
    ANd thanks for the input and inclusion of my blog!

  5. Sarah Joyce Bryant says:

    I love the artwork that accompanies this poem. I also like the economy of words and word choices. They work perfectly together.

    When I read the two words “existence” and “sense” it seemed they would flow better with “existence” and “senses.” My mind just automatically read it that way, so I thought I would suggest it.

    Thank you for stopping by my blog and leaving a comment. I really appreciate it πŸ™‚

    • aawww…thansk dear Sarah.. taht was really very sweet of you.. πŸ™‚
      yep i guess haresh was tryin to point out the same..
      thank you guys so much for taking so much interest in the poems πŸ˜€
      thansk for writng in dear.. and i hope you keep visitin πŸ˜€

    • woowwiiieeee……!!!!!1
      glad am i that you joined in πŸ™‚
      welcome aboard mate…
      lookin fwd to ur poetry every thursday…
      and yep jus abt in my way to ur blog πŸ˜€

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