Ok this time its a complete urdu-hindi poem..
and im sorry this is really tough to translate so i am keeping it as it is
I did try a bit translating themm.. but all my attempts were futile… cos i was never satisfied with the result and hence i am maintaining this in complete HINDI -URDU..
NON-HINDI readers please pardon me this time š¦
~~~~~~~~~~
Anjaam E Gham
Zindagi mein khushiyaan kam Mile..
Humein bas anjam e gham mile..
.
Lut gaye bhare bazaar..
Naa raha koi aazaar..
Aandhiyaa chal rahi jaise churiyaan..
Dekh rahi thi bas ye duniya..
Na pakda kisine haath..
Na diya kisine saath..
Zindagi mein khushiyiaan kam Mile..
Humein bas anjam e gham mile..
Tod gaya koi mera basera..
Reh gaya bas ek mitti ka dhera..
Pahuncha dil gehra thes yu..
Chal rahi ho jaise ghanghor loo..
kar raha pehra koi darinda..
na uddne de raha dil ka parinda..
Zindagi mein khushiyiaan kam Mile..
Humein bas anjam e gham mile..
Naa reh gayi jeene ki aas..
Naa aata mann ko kuch bhi raas..
Chaaro or bas cha gayi tanhaiyyaa..
Khafa mujse meri hi parchaiya..
Bebasi se hui yun mahroom..
Sannate hai gird-eĀ hujoom..
Zindagi mein khushiyiaan kam Mile..
Humein bas anjam e gham mile..
~~~~
I’m am but an amateur at URDU so in case i have made any mistakes i request you to please correct me.. š
Thats it from Megzone for now..!!
Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rocking..!! Keep Blogging..!!
Cheerios..!!
hey awesome lines… looks like straight from the heart.. š
btw te urdu was awesomely interspersed with hindi… Thumbs up.. š
aaawwwww……thankiiiesss š š
im glad you liked it
Lahorwilla kumquat
Fabulous š
abeeee teri š
LOL š
thanks kari š
Wonderful! Your poetic skills are improving with time.
But, try to write a positive poem na… ye padhkar to man š¦ ho jaata hain š„
Keep writing and keep rocking š
aawww…..thanks haresh š
positivity agar man mein hoti
tho meri post mere saath na roti š
thanks for writing in dear š
very well written, Megs, am not brilliant at either Hindi or Urdu and hence not sure of the language skills, the pathos is very palpable though and would agree with another post that it appears to come straight from the heart!! if that is true tho, makes me sad and worry for you. Will keep you in my prayers as I strongly believe in the ability of the ALmighty to help us come thru such phases stronger and wiser! God bless!
aaaaawwww…thanks Chechi..
i do belive that God would not gimme something that i cannot handle… HE knows my capabilities and capacities..
if there is an obstacle HE will even show the solution š
guzri hai ik joker ki tarha yea zindagi apni
maat deti rahi sada gham ko yea khushi apni
dil-e-nadaan ka moasam jo bhi raha ho par sooraj
hansaati rahi dunia ko yea zaahiri hansi apni
waah waah mere shayar….
ekdum dhinchaakkk
Tujhse bichar kar rota ho ga
gham ko kitna samajta ho ga
jin rahoon per chalta ho ga
teri yaad main tahrpta ho ga
tujhse jo na Keh sakta tha
ab wo khod se kheti ho ga
guzri battain guzre lamhain
yaad kar ke wo rota ho ga
fursat tum ko ho ke na ho
khat phir bhi likhta ho ga
aur likh ke, jalane se kuch phele
un ko wo khud bhi parhta ho ga
OMG.. bloody brilliant…
jisne toda hai hamara dil
nahi woh hamari manzil..
ujaad kar meri mehfil
royega nahi wo rakeeb dil
Wah.. Wah..
Zindagi ne zindagi bhar gum diye..
Jitne bi mausam diye sab num diye.. š
oi tennu ki hoya š
aadaab aadab
itna kiyu tragedy re š
itne dukhi dukhi words… gadbad gaano ka asar hai kiya…
loved the write š …
gadbad gaano se hi tho dil behelta hai madamjee š
warna tho zindagi mein nahi raha kuch š
the pics carry the weight of the words i dont understand…its nice just to read them and feel their flow.
Aaawww….that was really sweet of you Brian.. thank you soo much š
incredible!
š
aawww…thank JI š
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/24/well-here-comes-the-week-15-rally-awards-and-more/
three poetry awards,
hot blog award,
more…
aaaawwww…….thank you soooooo much Ji…
i feel really honoured š
Meg! that’s great!…:)…they sound real good…I wish I could hear you recite it…that would have been fun.
aawwww….thanks Nalini.. that was really very sweet of you š
Me got tribute, awards and nominations
here and
here
hugs
shakira
Dear friend,
A little gift (award) for you is waiting eagerly for you at my blog specially decked up for awards- accepting and sharing. Please collect it.
With warmest affections,
http://window2mysoul.wordpress.com/2010/04/22/friendship-cherished/
this was very very beautiful+sad
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/25/sunday-special-2/
5 awards on the bottom,
enjoy some!
Happy Monday!