Escape…!!


This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 10; the tenth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.

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ESCAPE

I was sitting by the window sill

Staring at a faraway hill

Should I take the plunge?

My heart began to lunge

Wondering what to do

Perusing what to construe

I’m in such a soup

Oh lord I have been duped

Should I jump out of the window?

Oh jeezz but it’s so low..

Heck I could still get out

But what if someone sees & gives a shout

Oh them I can always tackle

Even hang them up in shackle

How bleak is my future

Everything is a torture

I have time lemme jump

She calls out & my heart thumps

“Dinners ready we can eat”

There goes another chance in heap

When O lord will I escape her wrath

To escape her concoctions show me the path

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89 thoughts on “Escape…!!

    • @zorro..
      thanks re… yeaahhh… finally i got my chance to BAT πŸ˜›
      bowling kar kar ke thakk gayi πŸ˜›
      kkiieekkiieekkiiee :mrgreen:
      well on a serious note.. yes indeed finally i did participate and in many thanks to you and raavan.. warna as usual bhool jaati πŸ˜€

    • hey welcome to megzone.. and thanks a ton πŸ™‚
      ah.. well.. wanted the tags to be in tandem with the poem πŸ˜›
      thanks for commenting and i hope you keep visiting πŸ˜€

  1. That was hilarious. I didn’t get the story behind the poem until i read β€œDinners ready we can eat”.
    Nice poem. πŸ™‚
    All the best for blog-a-ton! πŸ™‚

    • aaww…Nethra thank you sooooo much πŸ˜€

      well i wanted to build a wee bit of suspense whilst writing the poem..But i did wanna drop a lil hint hence the first pic of an OLD MAN πŸ˜›

      thanks for writing in dear πŸ™‚
      i hope you do keep visiting πŸ˜€

  2. LOL!! Hilarious one!! I simply love poems esp the Humorous ones!!
    Glad you could identify yourself with my post!! πŸ˜€
    All the Best for B-A-T!!
    Value your Comments…Keep them coming!!
    Hope to see more such posts from you!!

    • hey thanks RUmya..
      yes loved your post thoroughly enjoyed it…
      thanks for Dropping by.. All the best to you too..
      N i do hope you keep visiting πŸ™‚

  3. lol.. niceone meghana.. For a foodie like me, I got goosebumps thinking about sch a possible future :p
    Welcome to Blogaton.. Please start following the blog asap to get blogrolled..

    • aahhh….the BAT Founder himself…
      awww… i knw.. its a nightmare when you end up with such a spouse πŸ™‚
      GoD bless you with a wonderful chef-wife πŸ˜€

      Vipul Followed already πŸ™‚
      please do blogroll me πŸ˜€

  4. hi Meghana, are u sure u are an amateur? sounds off track!
    lovely rhyme u have, and the theme of wife being a bad cook was hilarious.. never predicted that ending..
    All the best for BATOM 10 πŸ™‚

    Escape

    • LEo.. well i still believe i am an amateur cos there still room for improvement πŸ˜€

      aawww..thanks Leo… glad to know you guys liked it..
      thanks for dropping in and i hope you keep visiting πŸ™‚

    • hey Sourav…thanks a ton buddy πŸ™‚
      yes i did come across quite some serious ESCAPE posts myself πŸ˜€
      glad to knw i could make people smile πŸ˜€
      all the best to you too

      thanks a ton for dropping by and i hope you keep visiting πŸ˜€

    • Awwwww…thanks dear πŸ™‚
      glad to know you liked it and tht i managed to bring in a smile πŸ˜€

      do keep visitng its refreshing to see your comments here πŸ˜€

  5. Sudhakar says:

    Different sort of an escape. πŸ˜‰ Quite a unique take. Nice. Very relatable. πŸ˜‰

    And You mean mean girl. πŸ˜€ You wait. I’ll show this to the missus and let you know what her reaction was. πŸ˜‰

    • aaww… sudhi.. dont badnamkarofy my name to ur missus..
      i just remembered your status on FB last week and hence thought u mite wanna read it πŸ˜›

  6. Wow! A post starting off with the usually gloomy tone associated with escape topic and a humorous twist ! Cool stuff! Best of luck for the Blog-a-ton.

    • hey welcome to megzone πŸ™‚
      well i did want to maintain teh suspense factor in the poem πŸ˜€
      glad you liked it πŸ™‚

      Thanks for dropping in and i hope you keep visiting πŸ˜€

    • hey thanks Dhiman.. πŸ™‚
      yepp.. i have been reading a lot of escapades today and all seem to be kinda serious except maybe a couple here n there… πŸ˜€
      thanks for dropping by and i hope you keep visting πŸ™‚

  7. LOL…really enjoyed it. This poem has this rare feeling of being tragic in the beginning and gradually changed its tone to humor!! Wow..quite a feat.Loved it totally!!!

  8. liked the twist of humour in the end… The theme was a bit on the pessimistic side but the way you created a humorous feel to it just make sit all the more awesome.. HAts off to you for coming up with such a beaten the path thought

  9. dustus says:

    Great lines and funny too. Awesome as usual, Meg πŸ™‚
    Hope you’re having a great weekend. cheerios

    • aawww..thanks Adam πŸ™‚
      yep the weekend has been good so far.. πŸ˜€
      i hope you have been having a wonderful weekend too πŸ˜€
      Cheerios πŸ™‚

  10. //When O lord will I escape her wrath
    To escape her concoctions show me the path//
    hahahaha the twist was totally rocking πŸ˜€
    well penned girl πŸ™‚
    mummy maregi tujhe πŸ˜€

    • hey mahesh… welcome to megzone.. and im glad you liked the poem πŸ™‚

      thanks for dropping by and i hope you keep visiting πŸ˜€

    • aawww…thanks Shahid…
      yep imagine having to taste all weird concoctions that is called food πŸ˜›
      thanks for stopping by and i hope you keep visiting πŸ˜€

  11. haha real nice poem.. jumping off is preferable to be a guinea pig to someone’s notorious concoctions, eh? πŸ™‚

    liked the thoughts behind this..very simple n also, a real good twist!

    ALL THE BEST FOR B-A-T-O-M!

  12. Wow! that was a wonderful hilarious take on the prompt πŸ™‚
    Loved it πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€
    The cartoon is adding to the charm of your post πŸ™‚
    Keep up the good work girl!!

  13. Nice one.. i have read a lot of BAT on this escape thingy why is it Men are trying to escape from women In quiet a few he he he he

    Loved the way it was written … wish i could write so nicely .. the BAT scares me dont even know what it means most of the time …

    Hope I dont get the calls “Dinners Read we can EAT”… ooooh

    • hey thanks Bikram..
      well.. isnt that the most easiest and commonest form of ESCAPE πŸ˜‰
      men always either run behind women or away from women πŸ˜›

      oh cmon.. isme darne ki kyaa baat hai..
      trust me just start.. its the first step thats always difficult for everything
      wud u believe me if i said i was once scared of english poems..
      i could find my thoughts free flowing in hindi shayaris but english poems gave me nightmare..
      i tried and tried and this is where i stand.. πŸ˜€

      SO TRY BUDDY.. πŸ˜€
      NO HARM DONE right??

      • yeah will give it a try one day lets see and yep no harm done …

        and yeh kya hai men always either run behind women or away from women
        lai excuse me girls bhi karti hain πŸ™‚ he heh ee

  14. hahahaha I loved this one. By far the funniest. The pic is very impressive though. Good wishes for BAT
    would love to read your other poems etc. marking you. πŸ™‚
    good wishes for your writing

    • heyyyy…thank you soo much dear πŸ™‚

      best wishes to you too.. πŸ˜€
      do read them at leisure would like to have your comments on the same πŸ™‚

      thanks for dropping by and i hope you keep visiting πŸ˜€

  15. Lol… πŸ˜€ Here I was reading with a grim face the whole time until I came to the last few lines. Yanjaaayed thoroughly. πŸ˜€

    I wonder how you guys find those rhyming words. I’m enthralled really. Too good, yaar. πŸ™‚

    All the best for batom!

  16. LOL πŸ™‚ your poem made me smile and so did that cartoon πŸ™‚ One of the very few light hearted posts. Most of them are depressing and tragic (including mine). This one was nice πŸ™‚

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