This is yet another Loop poetry. Though this was created by Hellon, I was introduced to it by none other than Raji..
Rules of loop poetry are very simple and as follows:
There are no restrictions on the number of stanzas nor on the syllable count for each line. In each stanza, the last word of the first line becomes the first word of line two, last word of line 2 becomes the first word of line 3, last word of line 3 becomes the first word of line 4. This is followed for each stanza. The rhyme scheme is abcb.
1. Stanzas, writers choice on the number, no rhyming, the last word, first word scheme is maintained.
2. One long stanza, no limit on number of lines, no rhyming scheme, the last word, first word scheme is maintained.
3. Couplets mixed with 4 line stanzas, the last word, first word scheme is maintained in the stanzas. It can also be used in the couplets. Rhyme scheme is ab, cc, defg, hh, ii, jklm, nn, oo.
So here’s my loop poetry for the day.. I wrote it on my way from office..
An Evening Of Life….
Cloudy pleasant Evening…
Evening spent travelling..
Travelling through narrow roads..
Roads filled with traffic..
Traffic that seems unmoving..
Unmoving to fast pace of the city..
City that never does sleep…
Sleep, the only thing that eludes me..
Me a crazy insane character..
Character who has a fetish for poetry…
Poetry the best way to set myself free..
Free to soar like a bird..
Bird of desires and dreams..
Dreams make up my life..
Life that’s unpredictable..
YIppeee..!!!! yes yes not only cos its Thursday and time for the Poets Rally but also cos I won the Perfect Poet Award… aaahhh..!!! bliss.. complete Bliss…!!
Its been quite sometime since I had that award on my posts…. 😀
Thanks a ton JI 🙂
Here’s my award…
And my Nomination goes to Raji for sheer passion towards writing especially poetry…
If you are a poet and would like to dedicate one day of the week for poetry and meet a whole new world of poets you too can join the rally..
Ji has also been gracious enough to shower me with these awards for being a part of the rally..
The Most Open-Minded Poet Award
The Most Honest Poet Award
The Most Intelligent Poet Award
Thank you soooooo much Ji 🙂 you are indeed the sweetest…
That’s it from Megzone for now..!!
Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rocking..!! Keep Blogging..!!
44 thoughts on “Thursday Poets Rally ~ An Evening Of Life..!!”
I am not perfect,
you are perfect,
thus thank you for being so forgiving and loving…
another winner poem!
aaww..thanks JI and you are super perfect 😀
and yes you are still my sweeetestestest 😀
Very nice loop! Congrats on your “Perfect Poet” award as well!
Thanks for visiting the Undead Poets Society site. You are welcome back anytime.
(Undead)Poet / Wizard / Teller-of-tales
and yes i did completely enjoy visiting you blog.. will try to be as regular as possible 🙂
Thanks for the comment over at Undead Poets Society. I really enjoy this. Loops were introduced to me in 2005 by a guy who also demanded the pen never leave the page when writing these. Because of it, my notebooks look a mess. I like how there’s something about loops that feels almost like a sestina to me. Anyway, thanks. And don’t credit me, please credit Tim Keeton @UndeadPoets for the fib/cleave. All I did was reverse one of the fibs.
thanks Geoff for stopping by..
FIBS and ReverSe FIBS are new to me..
it wud be great if either of you could elaborate on its technique.. maybe iu could try one someday 😉
Very Nice — like the a city that does not sleep, sleep eludes me –congrats on winning the Perfect Poet Award…. thank you also for stopping in….
aaww..thank you soo much dear BKM…
glad to know you liked them 🙂
I have read this style before from one of mine and William’s member’s on “Billy’s World of Poetry.” But this is the first time I have seen anyone write this style since we closed the poetry site last year. I liked this style very much, and yours was a pleasure to read. Very well done Megzone. I do love your new way of writing, you have tone it down a lot and your poetry is so nice to read. Very much enjoyable.
hey thanks Vi..
i have already done coupla poems in the LOOP form.. after a loong time i picked it up again.. and yes with this form i do end up toning down on the vocab of the poems 🙂
dunno why but thats how it ends up being.. and im glad to know you liked it 🙂
Congrats for the award Meghiiiiiiiiiiii.. as usual tired of writing rey.. MAST THA poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😀
thankiiess baby 😀
well done megzone.I love this form , it gives coherence and cohesion to the poem.I’ll try it later.
hey thanks Abder 🙂
I love this form Megzone 🙂
Congrats on winning the Perfect Poet Award, well done 🙂
thank you very much dear 🙂
I’d never heard of the loop before now, but it looks real neat. The repetition works to give the poem a strong rhythm. You really capture the evening commute. I like how the poem strays from the examination of the surroundings to abstract musings by the speaker much like my mind on my drive home.
Also, thanks for the kind words on my poem 🙂
heyyy…thank you very much..
to me the LOOP poetry is the easiest form of poetry.. and its like a chain.. it can go on and on and on.. unless you decide to stop at a point.. 🙂
thank you soo much for liking it 🙂
Great one, Megz. Through this scheme you’ve created a very powerful chain of moving thought and feeling. cheerios 🙂
hey thanks Adam:)
it kinda does go on like a chain reaction.. u need to put an end to it..
Meg…you are so clever with poem…I really love the challenges you set for yourself…kudos!
aaww…Martin.. thank you sooo much 😀
What a beautiful Poem. I love it a lot. I have actually written something like this but didnt know it was called a “loop Poem”. Thanks for sharing. Beautiful indeed. Cheers!!!
hwy thaank you Emmanuel 🙂
woooww.. now you know its called LOOP 🙂
I always love your poetry…truly inspiring…
I need your help to finish a story here
aaw..thanks shakira 🙂
yep will try to help
what a perfect beauty meg. its smooth and easy flowing like a veil fluttering in evening breeze 🙂
aawww…thanks trisha.. thats a beautiful expression you made there 🙂
Lovely poem Meg, you’re always so busy doing things for others! It’s a pleasure to know your work
aaww..thanks dear 🙂
im glad you liked it 🙂
two awards on the bottom of the post.
you are the sweetest 😀
Fun word game, and a nice poem too– win/win!
heyyy thank you sooo much dear 🙂
Congrats on Perfect Poet Award! Loved this poem. Loved the meaning. It also had a nice flow to it.
hey thank you michele 😀
thats very sweet of you 🙂
Please visit poets who were here for you,
also let me know after you visited 12 fresh poets.
sure ji 🙂
brilliant piece…love how each line wraps into the next. beautifully done…
well thats how loop poetry works 😀
Love the imagery. Sounds like my trip home from work every day! Great Job!
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The poem must have been fun writing…congrats for all the awards!