hollaaaaaaa peepl…. 😀
yesss… the Thursday is here again 😀
and yes im back with another poem for my Rally…. 😀
If you are a poet and wouldnt mind dedicating one day of the week for POetry and also get a chance to read and meet many new poets and poetry… jus drop in a comment at Jingle’s blog
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/06/09/thursday-poets-rally-week-22-june-10-16-2010/
here’s my poem for this week’s rally..
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~::~Pain Reprise~::~
Every droplet lingers
Dripping between fingers
Wind whistling like singers
Dark clouds play harbingers.. Dark clouds play harbingers…
.
Heart aches and yearns
Throbbing pain returns
Like a storm it churns
But my mind spurns… But my mind spurns
.
Raindrops tickle my skin
Slipping down my chin
Lips flaunt a grin
A roaring sting within… A roaring sting within..
.
My hurt I suppress
Without much success
No matter how much I digress
Life’s a mess.. Life’s a mess…
.
Under darkened skies
There exist no lies
Silently sobbing eyes
Pain reprise.. Pain reprise
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Jingle has also been very kind and generous to bestow me with some lovely Awards…
Which I have put up in my Deluge of Awards Page 😀
do check them out.. and thanks a ton Ji 🙂
Do lemme know your thoughts on this…
Thats it from Megzone for now..!!!
Keep Smiling..! Keep Rocking..!! Keep Blogging…!!
Cheerios..!! 
Megzone 
Really nice….
The way you have used the words is inspiring…
Thanks for your feedback…!!
🙂
aawww…thanks dear Gaurav… that was swweeet of you 🙂
“under darkened skies there exist no lies” love this line! Beautiful images! Congratulations on your awards!
aaww..thanks dear 🙂
that was very sweet of you 😀
Meg,
I like how you repeat the last line of each stanza.
Thanks for visiting my site as well.
Tim Keeton
(Undead)Poet / Wizard / Teller-of-tales
hey thanks TIM 😀
its greaat to have your comments here
Meg,
I like how you repeat the last line of each stanza.
Thanks for visiting my site as well.
Tim Keeton
(Undead)Poet / Wizard / Teller-of-tales
thanks you dear TIM 😀
that wass very sweet of you 🙂
Refrains of Pain / heartbreak explained
—another poem to make me say “wow!”
aaww…Adam that was really very very sweet of you 😀
The pain is palpable, clever reprise.
Thanks for visiting my blog and congrats on your awards.
heyyy welcome to Megzone 😀
and im glad you liked it 😀
thanks for visitin dear 🙂
well done.
thank you for the contribution!
:0
aaww..thansk Ji 😀
and i knw why that expression came up 🙂
since i hadnt visited 18 i dint post my link on ur blog 😀
great writing as usual..
heyyy thanks dear fiveloaf 😀
Overall, i like this and i like the repetition of the last line.
Used well this can be very effective
awww..thanks you soooo much 😀
You are a marvellous poet meg. just beautiful.
awww Trisha you re jus sooo sweet and generous dear 😀
this shud be in some competition or something meghzz … tusin taan CHA gaye JI… bahut wadhiya 🙂
aawww…. thankiiess Bikky 🙂
ayehaye kahaa yaar competition 😛
WOW…YOU ROCK this…like a song..it SINGS to me…
lovely, my beautiful talented friend.
mine is here
Have you a rocking week!
hugs
shakira
awww…thanks Shakira dear 🙂
been a long time since you were here 😀
good to have you back 🙂
thanks a ton 😀
love the repitition through out and the depth of emotion…nicely done!
aawww..thanks brian 😀
what a great poem.your choice of particular words is amazing+ the lovely rhyming.well done meg.
aaawww…thanks dear Abder 🙂
your words are always an encouragement 🙂
thank you soooooo much 😀
This is a nice poem. Words evoke emotion.
awww..thaank you WEM 😀
im glad you liked it 🙂
welcome to Megzone and i hope you keep visiting 😀
Hey that was a really nice poem!
And I really love your blog and template :~)
Archieee… Pal…
great to see you here 😀
aawww..thankkiiess dear 🙂
i hope you be in touch and keep visiting 😀
You have some fabulous lines in here. love the repeats, it kind of pounds in the emotions. Very nicely done.
aawww..thanks Suzi.. 😀
im glad you liked it 🙂
thanks for writing and i hope you keep visiting 🙂
A haunting, sad poem.
wwow.. thanks Morgana..
welcome to megzone and i hope you keep visiting 😀
I have a new post on my childhood.
http://billmanson.blogspot.com/2010/06/working-as-family-viola-jane-tabor.html
wwooww Vi will check it out soon 😀
heyyy ….this is beautifulll …..amazing …. m so in love with it .. !
aawww…viddhi 😀
thanks darling.. 🙂
im so glad you liked it 🙂
Interesting poem. The wording of it makes it more lyrical.
aww..thanks Alex..
ya i gues it does 🙂
the part that states Life is a mess. Life is a mess…I kept saying My life is a mess. My life is a mess.
I like it….thank you for your feedback
aawww… i knw that line jus came in naturally to me 😀
and its catchy too..
thanks for writing in dear and i hope you keep visitin 😀
This is great!! I really love this stanza the most
“My hurt I suppress
Without much success
No matter how much I digress
Life’s a mess.. Life’s a mess…”
kudos to you!
here from Jingles
http://peachpitproduction.wordpress.com/2010/06/08/overturned/
thank you sooooo much ms peaches…
m glad you liked it..
thanks for writing in and i hope you keep visiting 🙂
nice hai ji… I am thinking if a song can be composed on this… try karta hoon… 😛
yaayyy…try kar try kar 😀
mere liyee 😀
yaayy yaayy yaay… mere poem kaa gaanaaa….taantteedaaannn 😀 😛 😀
Why so pain in this rain?
as usual mast likha hain. 🙂 par barish ke mausam me kuch romantic sa hojaye 🙂
roomani bhi cha jayega
jab wo mere kareeb aayega 😉
filhaal tho i was sooooo overawed with the pic that the words jus flowed into the page 😀
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/06/11/thursday-poets-rally-week-22-the-perfect-poet-award/
perfect poet award week 22.
Thank you for the participation!
wwooowww…thanks Ji 😀
that was really very sweet of you 😀
yaay yaay yaay.. perfect poet again
😀
It feels like a terribly sad moment, but you capture it beautifully.
aawww..thanks Katherine…
😀
Wow, this is fantastic! I love your word choice and the repetition of the last line in each stanza.
I’d like to nominate you in Jingle’s Poetry Rally :3 You can see here:
http://lestismitethee.wordpress.com/2010/06/04/writing-three-painful-turns-of-this-little-planet/
awww…thanks Gally 😀
that was very sweet of you thank you veryyy much 😀
I like it, I like it! 🙂
aawww..thaanks Keerth 😀
Lovely,,,, liked the style and the words 🙂
tere ko ye pain reprise bhi bahut pasnd shyd 😛 ve seen it some wr else too in your poems 😛
n no doubt pele tune ye likhaaa hoga thn baaki k liye in the para 😛
ihihhihiih but masttt poem hai 😀
waaahh.. chudel i;m impressed..
tuje mere writing ka pata chal gaya ab 😀
kuch words muje chodte nai
and yes as u said.. maine sabse pehle wo para hi likha tha.. 😉
I like this one a lot. The last line of each verse makes the whole poem throb in pain. I can feel it. thanks,
alan
hey thanks a ton Alan..
m glad you liked it 🙂
i was tryin to do a form poetry but ended up with soemthin else.. but no complaints as this one has turned out super swell 😀
Hey, great work. Where’d you find the image, or did you draw it? It fits the poem to a T.
Is there a name for this structure of rhyme repeats or did you invent it?