Thursday Poets Rally ~::~ Pain Reprise ~::~


hollaaaaaaa peepl…. πŸ˜€

yesss… the Thursday is here again πŸ˜€

and yes im back with another poem for my Rally…. πŸ˜€

If you are a poet and wouldnt mind dedicating one day of the week for POetry and also get a chance to read and meet many new poets and poetry… jus drop in a comment at Jingle’s blog

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/06/09/thursday-poets-rally-week-22-june-10-16-2010/

here’s my poem for this week’s rally..

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~::~Pain Reprise~::~

Every droplet lingers

Dripping between fingers

Wind whistling like singers

Dark clouds play harbingers.. Dark clouds play harbingers…

Β .

Heart aches and yearns

Throbbing pain returns

Like a storm it churns

But my mind spurns… But my mind spurns

Β .

Raindrops tickle my skin

Slipping down my chin

Lips flaunt a grin

A roaring sting within… A roaring sting within..

Β .

My hurt I suppress

Without much success

No matter how much I digress

Life’s a mess.. Life’s a mess…

Β .

Under darkened skies

There exist no lies

Silently sobbing eyes

Pain reprise.. Pain reprise

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Jingle has also been very kind and generous to bestow me with some lovely Awards…

WhichΒ I have put up in my Deluge of Awards Page πŸ˜€

do check them out.. and thanks a ton Ji πŸ™‚

Do lemme know your thoughts on this…

Β Thats it from Megzone for now..!!!

Keep Smiling..! Keep Rocking..!! Keep Blogging…!!

Cheerios..!!Β  :mrgreen:

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65 thoughts on “Thursday Poets Rally ~::~ Pain Reprise ~::~

    • aawww… i knw that line jus came in naturally to me πŸ˜€
      and its catchy too..
      thanks for writing in dear and i hope you keep visitin πŸ˜€

  1. Garfy Boy says:

    Why so pain in this rain?

    as usual mast likha hain. πŸ™‚ par barish ke mausam me kuch romantic sa hojaye πŸ™‚

    • roomani bhi cha jayega
      jab wo mere kareeb aayega πŸ˜‰
      filhaal tho i was sooooo overawed with the pic that the words jus flowed into the page πŸ˜€

  2. Lovely,,,, liked the style and the words πŸ™‚
    tere ko ye pain reprise bhi bahut pasnd shyd πŸ˜› ve seen it some wr else too in your poems πŸ˜›
    n no doubt pele tune ye likhaaa hoga thn baaki k liye in the para πŸ˜›
    ihihhihiih but masttt poem hai πŸ˜€

    • waaahh.. chudel i;m impressed..
      tuje mere writing ka pata chal gaya ab πŸ˜€

      kuch words muje chodte nai
      and yes as u said.. maine sabse pehle wo para hi likha tha.. πŸ˜‰

  3. alan says:

    I like this one a lot. The last line of each verse makes the whole poem throb in pain. I can feel it. thanks,
    alan

    • hey thanks a ton Alan..
      m glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      i was tryin to do a form poetry but ended up with soemthin else.. but no complaints as this one has turned out super swell πŸ˜€

  4. robot cupcake poetry says:

    Hey, great work. Where’d you find the image, or did you draw it? It fits the poem to a T.
    Is there a name for this structure of rhyme repeats or did you invent it?

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