Free-Flow Poetry ~::~ Random Thoughts ~::~

Sev a wonderful artist, blogger and what not πŸ™‚

He threw a challenge for all his fellow bloggers.. and yes since im always up for challenges how can I not pick this up πŸ˜€

For details on the challenge check Sev’s post

and here’s what I came up with…

Sev I hope I lived upto your expectations πŸ˜€


~::~ Random Thoughts ~::~

As I play the music

A wave hits over me

A feeling of chaos

A dream I am chasing

I’m flying I’m flowing

For words I’m floundering

The beat takes a rhythm

Slowly gathers pace

The chaotic mind

Also on a plane

A journey they begin

A collage of pictures

Captured by time

A feeling of overwhelming

My Soul bursts apart

Scattered into smithereens

Every particle depicts me

The person that I am

My soul my essence

Even my shadow in its presence

As if a movie rewinds

And plays again

Over and over in my heart

A fluttering of wings

A butterfly tickles

Some flowers bloom

Couple smiles captured

In my memory

Some corner of my brain

There exists a me apart from me


This is also my acceptance post of the Perfect Poet Award Week 23 πŸ™‚

Thank you soo much Ji πŸ™‚ and keeping in accordance with tradition I would like to nominate Noha

You guys too lemme know your thoughts too…

That’s it from Megzone for now..!!

Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rocking..!! Keep Blogging..!!


PS –some new awards presented by sweetest Jingle are on the Deluge of Awards Page πŸ˜€

Ji I’m extremely sorry for being late L work has been super crazy this week.. the lack of rally has turned out to be a blessing in disguise cos I wudnt have been able to participate then L

57 thoughts on “Free-Flow Poetry ~::~ Random Thoughts ~::~

  1. My expectations never were to see a masterpiece.
    Just some poetic movement.
    I love what you’ve created here.
    A great poem.
    The think i am most interested in is how you found the experience and whether it is something you’d do again

    • aaawww.. Sev you’re bein generous too generous with words πŸ™‚
      this aint no masterpiece just my try at your challenge πŸ˜€
      and yes i sooo sooo loved the idea..
      m sure the next time my mind is blank m gonna pick this up πŸ˜€

    • eeehhh.. split personality tho Sree ko πŸ˜›
      yaad hai Sree and SHE πŸ˜†

      /Masttttt poem n liked the flow/
      weeeeeeeeeeee……….thankksss πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€

      /ME in ME/
      ye bhi accha title hai naa.. muje najane kyu nai soojha 😦

  2. AD says:

    My Soul bursts apart
    Scattered into smithereens
    Every particle depicts me
    The person that I am

    Deep and meaningful lines…. Your poetry has inspired many to write…

  3. Meg, what a great response to Sev’s challenge. You really rose to it with this delightful feel for what happens as music plays. Appreciate it much. Re: Sev’s idea – I see it went “viral” – 100 comments as I write this. How nice to see such happen with something that is neither trite nor trival. My own response to his challenge here:

    P.S.: Lovely illustrations here.

  4. Doni Cifra says:


    the theme and the form are a great match… you have to search for the order in chaos like you have to search for the you apart from you…

  5. mitchicus says:

    Meg, Great poem! as a guy with a deep appreciation of the connection between music and poetry, i can honestly say that this is amazing.

  6. fabulous!! ever poem i read of urs, u seems to better the previous one!!!
    this is cool and this state-of-the-mind happens with everyone of us (music is intoxicating for sure :P), but we are lazy enough to pen it down so beautifully!!
    i take this challenge too but will take time to come up with something..
    the idle brain of a man u can say πŸ˜›

  7. Tasha says:

    Your poem had a fantastic rhythm and flow to it! A very enjoyable read, thanks for sharing your wonderful gift!

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