Sev a wonderful artist, blogger and what not 🙂
He threw a challenge for all his fellow bloggers.. and yes since im always up for challenges how can I not pick this up 😀
For details on the challenge check Sev’s post
http://artswebshow.com/2010/06/24/free-flow-poetry-let-go-of-reality/
and here’s what I came up with…
Sev I hope I lived upto your expectations 😀
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~::~ Random Thoughts ~::~
As I play the music
A wave hits over me
A feeling of chaos
A dream I am chasing
I’m flying I’m flowing
For words I’m floundering
The beat takes a rhythm
Slowly gathers pace
The chaotic mind
Also on a plane
A journey they begin
A collage of pictures
Captured by time
A feeling of overwhelming
My Soul bursts apart
Scattered into smithereens
Every particle depicts me
The person that I am
My soul my essence
Even my shadow in its presence
As if a movie rewinds
And plays again
Over and over in my heart
A fluttering of wings
A butterfly tickles
Some flowers bloom
Couple smiles captured
In my memory
Some corner of my brain
There exists a me apart from me
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This is also my acceptance post of the Perfect Poet Award Week 23 🙂
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/06/18/the-perfect-poet-award-4-thursday-poets-rally-week-23/
Thank you soo much Ji 🙂 and keeping in accordance with tradition I would like to nominate Noha
You guys too lemme know your thoughts too…
That’s it from Megzone for now..!!
Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rocking..!! Keep Blogging..!!
Cheerios..!!
PS –some new awards presented by sweetest Jingle are on the Deluge of Awards Page 😀
Ji I’m extremely sorry for being late L work has been super crazy this week.. the lack of rally has turned out to be a blessing in disguise cos I wudnt have been able to participate then L
Megzone 
I truly enjoy this poem,
excellent flow…
thank you for the nomination!
😉
aawww…thanks Ji 🙂
and im really sorry for being late :(:(
A very nice poem…it was quite pleasant to read…thanks!
heyyy…….thanks martin 🙂
that was sweet of you 😀
Hey, Meg. Having tried this, quite an amazing poem you wrote. Well done
weeeeeeeeeee…………thanks Adam 🙂
this was a superb idea by Sev 🙂
i sooo love it already.. m sure im gonna do more of this 😀
Hi Meg! Posted my Arts Web Show challenge response…
that’s a beautiful poem meg.. you’re very talented dear friend.. thank you for nominating me xoxo
aaww…thanks Noha dear 🙂
and your poetry has always impressed me so the pleasure is all mine 😀
My expectations never were to see a masterpiece.
Just some poetic movement.
I love what you’ve created here.
A great poem.
The think i am most interested in is how you found the experience and whether it is something you’d do again
aaawww.. Sev you’re bein generous too generous with words 🙂
this aint no masterpiece just my try at your challenge 😀
and yes i sooo sooo loved the idea..
m sure the next time my mind is blank m gonna pick this up 😀
This is a very beautiful poem Meg with a smooth flow. I have to say it is my favorite of your poems.
aawwwwwwww…..thanks Vi 🙂
that was really very sweet of you 😀
This is awesome…so well written:)
aawww…thankss buttercup.. ur nt jus a buttercup ur a sweetheart too 🙂
The flow is nice.. Liked it very much..:)
aawww..thaankss sush 😀
wqould like to see you try this too 😀
Just came here off of the Artswebshow site to read your poem – very beautiful! 🙂
heyyy…welcome to Megzone dear 🙂
m glad you liked it and i hope you keep visitin 😀
There exists a me apart from me/ /Split personality kahi ki 😛
Masttttt poem n liked the flow 🙂 ME in ME 😀
eeehhh.. split personality tho Sree ko 😛
yaad hai Sree and SHE 😆
/Masttttt poem n liked the flow/
weeeeeeeeeeee……….thankksss 😀 😀
/ME in ME/
ye bhi accha title hai naa.. muje najane kyu nai soojha 😦
My Soul bursts apart
Scattered into smithereens
Every particle depicts me
The person that I am
Deep and meaningful lines…. Your poetry has inspired many to write…
heyyy… AD looongg time 😀
howdydoing???
awww..cmon ur just being generous with words 🙂
Meg, what a great response to Sev’s challenge. You really rose to it with this delightful feel for what happens as music plays. Appreciate it much. Re: Sev’s idea – I see it went “viral” – 100 comments as I write this. How nice to see such happen with something that is neither trite nor trival. My own response to his challenge here:
http://wp.me/pne74-3Di
P.S.: Lovely illustrations here.
heyy…thank you Jamie 🙂
that was sweet of you,… and yes i read yours too 😀
its brilliant 😀
very beautiful poem, thanks for sharing 🙂
heyy..thank you Sayed…
welcome to megzone and i hope you keep visiting 😀
😉 good job!
heeyyy…thanks dear 🙂
I like the flow of this poem as well as the content. Great to read!
Thank you jessica 🙂
glad to know you liked it 🙂
This is an awesome work MEG! This is an epitome of poetry! Welcome to the rally!
Here’s my work:
http://ediomoudofia.blogspot.com/2010/06/i-promise.html
awww…thanks ediomo that was really sweet of you 😀
congratulations on your award!!! 🙂 i liked your poem as well!!! keep writing these kinds of poems! they can inspire people… 🙂
aawwww…thank you dear 🙂
i would say you rose to and met that challenge…smiles.
aawww…brian that was sweet of you thank you 😀
It’s cool how such mind chaos comes together so wonderfully…I like it!
thank you dear 🙂
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aaww.. Ji thank you sooo much 😀
you are the best 😀
awesome…loved this line especially
Every particle depicts me
The person that I am
heyy..that was sweet of you hoiden 😀
thanks for stopping by and i hope you keep visiting 😀
nice…
the theme and the form are a great match… you have to search for the order in chaos like you have to search for the you apart from you…
SO musical, would be good to a tune.
Meg, Great poem! as a guy with a deep appreciation of the connection between music and poetry, i can honestly say that this is amazing.
fabulous!! ever poem i read of urs, u seems to better the previous one!!!
this is cool and this state-of-the-mind happens with everyone of us (music is intoxicating for sure :P), but we are lazy enough to pen it down so beautifully!!
i take this challenge too but will take time to come up with something..
the idle brain of a man u can say 😛
beautiful poem, when i read it out loud its very jazzy, love this 🙂
Your poem had a fantastic rhythm and flow to it! A very enjoyable read, thanks for sharing your wonderful gift!
As if in the music the mind finds chaotic harmony. Always a division, always a singularity. I enjoyed
Lovely poem. It has a great movement to it.
Hi, I’m new here!
Very… jazzy, bubling poem, & nice blog!
Hi, I’m new here!
Very… jazzy, bubbling poem, & nice blog!
such a beautiful journey of wandering thoughts 🙂
this is amazing. ill def be back to read more.
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Did you not know we are always seeing ourselves as what we hope we are and what we fear we are? Well done.