It seems looongggg looonggg ago since I wrote a poetry here π
yes yes… so here i am back again to trouble you with my insane err.. ook super-insane poems π
~::~ Dance of Love ~::~
She danced through the meadows
Impassive to any lurking shadows
Spring in her step, arms stretched apart
Curls let loose, rhythm in her heart
Dancing to natureβs tunes
Oβer multi-hued flowery dunes
Her lover returning from faraway lands
She awaits with aromatic garlands
Moving with such elegance
Fair maiden with love immense
Pirouettes she took, as if in stupor
Round & round till her feet turned sore
Exhausted she fell, amidst rose bushes
He came searching; saw her worn out, rushes
Her hands in his, he interlaced
Took her in his arms, caressing her face
Bestowed on luscious lips, a magical kiss
She arose to his passion, his loveβs abyss
The dance of love, her prelude
Concluded with him, albeit brief interlude
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beautiful,
love your dance of love!
π
aawww..thanks ji π
woww Megsssiee.. the rhyme is awesome.. π
//Bestowed on luscious lips, a magical kiss
She arose to his passion, his loveβs abyss
The dance of love, her prelude
Concluded with him, albeit brief interlude// superr π
It seems like someone painted that picture after reading this poem π
awwwwwwwwww…….thanks Roh π
AAwww mast! π after long time! π
Spring in her step, arms stretched apart
Curls let loose, rhythm in her heart.. Mast π
eeeee…thankkksss
This is truly a magical dance of love, I love the passion, the rhythm and the emotion of this poem
weeeeeeee……..thanks Di π
thats beautiful…
the wait.. the dance… the sadness… and then comes the love of her life π beautifully described π bohut dino k baad teri poem parhi π
aree bahut dino baad tho main khud likhi π
hheehehehe :d
thankiiee raji π
its good yaar, the reason i never miss out on ur poems π
i second what roh said, “it seems like someone painted that picture after reading this poem”..
i understood the whole thing except for the last line..
“the dance of love, her prelude
concluded with him, albeit brief interlude”..
just the interlude thing!
is it just an imagination for the girl that her lover has come and the whole kiss n all?
when she wakes from her tiredness she will find no one.. is it so? and thus the romance is just an imagery!!!
prelude was the dance she did
interlude was the break in between wen she fainted
conclusion was her love finding her π
ab samjhe bhondu π
Aww… so romantic and beautiful…
The flow of the poem is really lovely!!! π
heyyyy.,….thanks kavi π
I’ve missed your voice upon these pages…it is wonderful to read your words again…this was just beautiful…welcome home!
awwww….thanks dear martin π
Reading the stuff her after a long time. Anyways I loved this poem Megs… u have grown so much since I have started following ur blog… hatrs off my frnd and leep them coming… pleasure reding ur stuff
Cheers!
Tavish
aaweeeeeeee…………. π
thaankkiiieeeeee π
The flow of the poem is completely awesome. Though, I was unable understand most of the poem, but, yes I still liked reading it!
hey thanks arjit π
thats sweet of you π
excellent.
It’s been a while since i read some poetry of yours. but i do like your witty comics
awwww…thanks Sev π
coming from you thats a super compliment π
Beautiful, Meghs π
and the new/unusual words blended so much into the flow of the poem.. Loved it
eeeeeee……..Alpy…thankkeeeee π
Very beautifully done,enjoyed it.
awww….thank you dear GyanBan
Missed your poetry! “Dancing to natureβs tunes / Oβer multi-hued flowery dunes” Nice image and sound to the whole poem.
awww…thanks Adam dear π
well written…u mend word very well…u array dem perfectly…
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hey thanks namit π
Where did you find this painting?
Also your poem reminds me of Song of Solomon. It is The Love Story of our Creator and those who love Him and desire a closer relationship with Him. Though there is no physical touching or kissing it represents the love and purpose our soul desires.
Thank you for sharing your poem it is beautiful!