I wonder why and what’s keeping me so much away from my darling bloggy 😦
poor thing seems to be sleeping now n then..
wonder whose cast a bad spell on it 😦
sigh!!!
anyways I am back with the Thursday Poets Rally…….
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/08/25/thursday-poets-rally-week-27-august-26-sept-1-2010/
and yes Ji has been super sweet to honour me with the Celebrate poets for july award 😀
yesss 😀
I seem to have been preparing for a perfect poem for over a week already 😀
and here’s my offering.. 😀
please follow the directions given by arrows to read the poem..
Do let me know your thoughts 😀
Thats it from Megzone for now..!!
Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rocking..!! Keep Blogging…!!
Cheerios..!! 
PS – Adam this seems to be a tad related to what we happened to have discussed over FB 😉
Wow, I loved it! Very interesting how you wrote your poem in the shape of a footprint.
It is very sad to watch a beautiful relationship/friendship die down over time. Very painful. You’ve brought out the feeling very well. Great poem!
thank you dear 🙂
yes indeed.. some relations jus leave behind footprints
nice idea…it was kinda surprising to actually see a footprint…and sadly enough the message is soooooo very very true…
thank you dear lilliana 🙂
yes thats life indeed 😦
Really fun. I think I went around your foot three times before I realized what I was doing. Great reading experience.
aawww… poor you 😦
and i thot i had put up the directions so it wud make sense 😦
dumb me 🙄
what you’ve written is so true, meghana! and, doing it in the form of a footprint must have been hard. Great 🙂
aawww..thanks Amrita 🙂
and thats precisely why i said i had started preparing for the rally a week in advance 😀
Wow, that’s awesome!! Very interesting.
aaww….
thank u Ewan that was sweet of you 😀
bloody brilliant megs… thats some creativity… very very nice…
eeeeeeee…….thanks Tavs 😀
raji ko bhi thankies bolo 😀
she has been a gud teacher to gimme such interesting challenges 😀
ekdum mast likhi re 😀
the shape has come out well…and the words kiya bolu … very thoughfully penned…
awesome awesome write…
eeeeee 😀
thankkkuuuuu for the challenge 😀
and yes im glad u liked it 🙂
That was awesome! Lots of fun almost like a puzzle and the reward is the poem! Lovely writing as well!
aaaawwwww…soweee for the trouble Amanda…
woah woah!!!
i went dizzy trying to read it… on who are u taking this revenge 😦
but lovely 🙂 i liked it… can u teach me how to do this stuff?
ooolleeeee 😐
no revenge… and sowweeee for the dizzyness
u r very talented poet indeed,
see how unique your post is,
perfect plus beautiful,
I am very impressed!
🙂
eeeeeeeeeeee…………
thanks Ji 😀
im glad you liked it 😀
yes, everything will turn lovely in relations and everyone will smile, hopefully…
smart words and lovely thoughts,
loved reading it.
I will mark you down as done…
way to go!
🙂
aawww…thanks Ji..
yes i hope so all turns out well 😀
thanks so much for kind words 😀
I have no words to describe this work, megzone..
Do stop by Sweetened Waters
–Someone Is Special–
aaww…thank u so much dear 🙂
From now on am following your blog…
Thanks for your wonderful comments, do keep coming and enjoy tamil verses on my blog..
–Someone Is Special–
Now that is AWESOME. Great words and imagery not to mention the foot. Great job. Be Inspired Today! Love and Light, Sender
thank you sender 🙂
im glad you liked it 🙂
what a creative presentation of your lovely poem which evoked a lot of emotions! simply brilliant!!!
thannk you dear 🙂
quite good Megz.. my mind loved the shape (my neck unfortunately didn’t) 🙂
nice contribution to the the rally.
LOL 😆
sorrry abt ur neck 😛
zandu balm lagao 😛
dard dooor bhagao 😛
I LOVE the creativity, and it’s so true!
thank you dear Jessica
m glad you liked it 🙂
Wow I love this! Quite a clever layout!
Pamela
awww…thank you dear pamela 😀
those were indeed kind words 😀
Wishing you wonderful Returns of the Day Meg..
This is what I had gifted myself- this year; you too could take a peep..
Happy Birthday to Me
Many Happy Returns of My Day..
hey thanks Olivia 😀
Belated Birthday wishes to you too 😀
Your post is so creative…..
and equally well written.. Awesome.. Brilliant..
🙂
awww..thanks dear Olivia that was sweet of you 😀
OMG! ARE U AWESOME!?? I’m so glad I came in here again! Wonderfully done! hats off! :))
hey thanks a ton Purvi 😀
glad you stopped by 😀
I had a friend who wrote picture poetry. I always loved but I’ve never attempted it.
Love your words.
oh u must try Raven.. it looks difficult and yes time consumign indeed 😀
but the satisfaction after completing it is uncomparable 😀
What an interesting idea. And you got the words to fit the picture! That alone is really great, plus it’s a good poem. All around good job! How did you get the words to go around like that? It must have taken you a very long time.
indeed morganna it did take time..
but after seeing the result and the innumerable lovely comments and love that you all have showered me i guess it was indeed worth all the sweat 😀
thank you so much dear 😀
Sad but true poem. Extradinary presentation. I LOVE it! How clever and befooting…I think also I’m supposed to wish you a belated happy b’day … can’t remember whether or not I do, but I do.
awww..Jamie thank you so much..
well u already wished me bday dear 🙂
on the very day of my bday u wished me so no harm done thank you so much once agaion 😀
loved it totally… it was vivid.. beautiful… so expressive.
thanks for sharing.
anky thank you soo much 😀
Very expressive and creative!! You always surprize us dear Meg xx
aaww..buttercup..thank you soo much sweety 😀 and you always have such wonderful kind words for me 😀
I have no idea how you did it (the shape, I mean) but it’s AWESOME!!!!!
Friendships begin, take so many turns, and some just end end up leaving hollow footprints…some live on… I think you’ve nailed the feeling perfectly, Megzie!!! You rock!!!! 🙂
(hugs to you, gal)
kavi 😀
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 😀
thaaankkk uuuu soooo muchhh 😀 😀 😀
neato! challenging to write in a shape and loved the words to form the toes 🙂
happy belated birthday!
aah tough indeed but the immense satisfaction that i gain from all your lovely comments motivates me to do only better 😀
Wow, I would love to know how you did this! The words are lovely, too. Wonderful job. Have a great weekend.
rosidah 😀
i did it completely on powerpoint 😀
and i love it too..
thank u so much 😀
Very clever, reminds me of the shape poems I had to do at school (I always went for something easy like a circle!). Love the thoughts running through it.
Jessica :d
thank you dear 🙂
you shud try more 🙂
love the photo!
thank you dear Oinky 😀
Interesting presentation, challenging to read but when you get from the beginning to the end you want to start again – or read backward.
wow.. thank you sooo much dear 🙂
Hi Meg,
The footprints was amazing!!! Very creative… Enjoyed reading ur blog…
aww..thanks dear Medhini 😀
indeed. people come into our lives for a reason. the whole concept was actually cute yet metaphorical. i loved it.
thank you D
yes indeed life is full of people coming n going with some leaving footprints 😀
wow!
great work, such a creative poem,,
thank you dear 🙂
got confused with the flow.. the words are cool nonetheless..
yeah, it often happens with ppl, too much of love at one time n then problems galore..
relationships should be built smoothly;y over a period of time with warmth, care, mutual understanding etc..
good one megz.. yeah! the footprints remain for sure, no matter what..
god bless u.. u are a talented poet dear lady
heeheehehee :d
i knw isliye i put directions and yet u got confused eh :O
ya to teri wiring mein gadbad hai ya fir meri :p
kitni tareef karega.. us layak hui nai main abhi 😀
Functional poetry … whodathunkit! Thanks for rallying….
thank you so much dear 🙂
this is simply awesome, that footprint which contains your poems. just fantastic. you are marvelous.
thank you dear trisha that was sweet of you 😀
letting u know I am collecting your poem,
which is an foot image…
have to try a few times.
🙂
I am amazed at the congruency of human nature. I didn’t read this before, but I just posted a story, Mixed Bag, yesterday that deals with this theme exactly. I love what you’ve done with this.
Ahh, an abstract poem, extrodinaire! Love the shape this poem takes, step by step, to discover the flaws of being human! Nicely done Meg, ;-))
~Denise
You should do more visual poetry!