Yippeee!! m back.. π
oh yes for all those who missed me.. Sorry for not updating my blog as I was on a short vacation and yes now am back with bang π
and yes its time for Monday’s Child err on Wednesday today π¦
http://childrensverse.blogspot.com/
sorry for the delay but im def well in time π
so here’s my interpretation π
~::~ Iliza ~::~
Little Iliza had a wish
To see far lands in a twitch
Iliza wanted to fly high
Up and up in the deep blue sky
One day she hatched a plan
To fulfil her dreams and see all lands
She gobbled down coupla gums
Chewed n chewed till her mouth was numb
She rushed up to her terrace
Lest her face becomes a mess
There she stood atop the ledge
Almost teetering at the edge
She blew the gum, a bubble formed
Blowing on and on she calmed
So big the bubble, rose up high
Flew Iliza too, towards the sky
Over the castles, mountains n moors
She flew and flew without detours
There came a crow with a beak so sharp
Poked the bubble whilst Iliza was up a scarp
Down fell Iliza tumbling and rushing with the wind
Reeling through slopes, yet proud of her stintβ¦
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I hope Β you guys liked it..
Do leave your comments and lemme know…
Thats it from Megzone for now..!!
Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rocking..!! Keep Blogging..!!
Cheerios..!!!
Very well written. I believe this is my second visit to your blog and this is the second poem I have read. And I must say you are a very good poet. Will be subscribing to your blog s.t. I do not miss out on your future posts. π
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wow..!!!
thanks prateek :d
yes its your second indeed π
Nice one..:) Loved the way u weaved a fantasy dream with your imagination.. π
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thanks Sush π
awwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!! Very cute poem! π
gives a perfect imagery π Kidsssss will love it! π why?! everyone will π
weeeeeeeeeee……..thanks di π
heheheheheh i hope everyone does π
Oh…that was just fun to read…thanks!
heyyy thanks martin π
Great take…can fully understand this one…off Iliza went to see the world…she truly has the heart of a world traveler …glad she got to come down and venture through new lands…thank you Meghana..wonderful..bkm
hehehe tu hi aise kaam kar sakti hai…
really this reminded me of you π
lovely fantasy poem π
Was just sooo lovely to read Megz….glad to see you back!!! x
very cute. π
wish comes true,
fly into the sky that is blue…
love your poetry,
well done!
You can really put these poem in children’s books… this one was really very sweet…
Do you think Iliza will share some gum (a fresh piece of course) with me? π
super duper yaar.. sorry for not being on-time with ur blog.. and i know u had a good time out there in ur vacation, the reason the happiness and the detour is so visible out here.. a very nice one.. i just wonder one thing.. where at all u get such a deadly combo of pics n words… too good megz.. kids will super love it am sure, not that i didnt..