~::~ Sleep Walking ~::~


I wonder what had gotten into me… ๐Ÿ™„

words that once freely flowed like water are now harder to catch…

anyways.. Thursday is here ๐Ÿ™‚

and so is the Rally…

Yep Jingle is back with the Thursday Poets Rally this weekk.. all you poets out there do check out the Rally site and join in ๐Ÿ™‚

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/09/22/thursday-poets-rally-week-29-sept-23-29/

and this time.. again i am back with a poem..

well not exactly a poem but its a HAIKU ๐Ÿ˜€

yep dabbling in haiku again.. haiku masters spare me the rod cos i am still learning the ropes of the poetic forms…

~::~ Sleep-walking ~::~


Lost in dreams he walked

Backwards retraced steps asleep

Tripped and fell head first

I hope you liked this haiku.. Do lemme know your thoughts..

Thats it from Megzone for now..

Keep smiling..!! Keep Rocking..!! Keep Blogging…!!

Cheerios..!! :mrgreen:

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77 thoughts on “~::~ Sleep Walking ~::~

    • lol ๐Ÿ˜€ leoooo
      will ask him how his head feels ๐Ÿ˜›
      and no i dint cheat on the he/she part ๐Ÿ˜›
      it was indeed a HE ๐Ÿ˜›
      why.. cos only men are idiosyncratic ๐Ÿ˜›
      heeheheheh ๐Ÿ˜€

    • woow ๐Ÿ˜€
      thanks JI ๐Ÿ™‚
      and yes i will indeed try to attend Leo’s haiku heights ๐Ÿ˜€
      though i feel m not very well versed with Haiku i will def try ๐Ÿ˜€

  1. Loved your haiku. I have never been able to express myself in such elegance so swiftly. Conjures up a picture that is both nuanced and beautiful. Very enjoyable to read then daydream about.

    crb.

    • aaaainggg….. ๐Ÿ˜ฏ
      watchu doing on my blog :O
      its been wat eeoonnsss since i saw u here ๐Ÿ™„
      anyways thankiiiess a bunch ๐Ÿ˜€

      oh well men are more idiosyncratic than us women ๐Ÿ˜‰
      we are more sophisticated u see we dont sleep walk ๐Ÿ˜›
      so well thats ur answer and thanks for writing in ๐Ÿ˜€

  2. 700miles says:

    i really enjoy haiku…. i like that this can be interpreted literally….somebody stumbling around or look at it in a deeper way, like how we subconsciously re-construct our past, and sometimes will fall head first right back into the old routines / problems /situations… just my take. fun haiku. take good care.

    • wooww..thats a wonderful insight dear ๐Ÿ˜‰
      though i had definitely not planned it in that way.. but i like the way you look at things ๐Ÿ™‚
      thank you soo much for writing in dear ๐Ÿ™‚
      happy rally ๐Ÿ˜€

  3. Very nice…. specially as I like haiku’s a lot… thanks for sharing…

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  4. though i got the essence of the haiku u have written but am yet to appreciate this form of poetry..
    gotta read about it first.. this much i know that its actually a japanese from, but widely used in english these days..
    nice one..

  5. simply checking,
    please return favors to those who are here..
    Happy Tuesday!

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