Yippeee..!!! It’s monday and yes indeed I am back with my poetry for Monday’s Child.. ๐
http://childrensverse.blogspot.com/
and this week has seen an awesome pic ๐
I soooooo loved it that poetry flowed automatically ๐
so here’s my verse ๐
~::~ Two Little Girls ~::~
Lizzy and Missy two little girls
1blond 1 brunette, both with curls
Sisters them, playing in the slush
Muddy dresses, Mommy asked them to rush
โLook at yourselves, dresses dirty, unkempt hairโ
Got them all cleaned, fresh clothes to wear
โNow you are grounded for days to comeโ
Hearing these words poor girl became numb
โYou are ought not to go out and play
Inside the house I need you to stayโ
โHelp me around the house with choresโ
Their puppy โeyed look, mommy ignores
โHereโs a pack of wool, you shall work on
Only when itโs done, shall your punishment be withdrawnโ
Now little Lizzy and Missy sat on a stool
Busy sorting out red balls of wool
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I hope you liked the poem.. Do let me know your thoughts…!!
I would also like to tag this to Jingle’s Monday poetry potluck..
http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/09/monday-poetry-potluck-kings-queens-and.html
Thats it from Megzone for now..
Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rocking..!!! Keep Blogging…!!!
Cheerios..!!
I love it and I can remember rolling in the mud with my sister and sitting in water puddles…..and getting in a load of trouble….your write is so cute….so glad you posted it….bkm
thank you barbara ๐
firstly a big thanks for bringing such lovely pics for us to write on ๐
and yes i played a lot in the mud and used to get grounded too ๐
so this ones a lil closer home ๐
One of the sweetest children poems of yours ๐
//Lizzy and Missy two little girls
1blond 1 brunette, both with curls// these two lines… steal the show ๐
Loved it completely though ๐
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thaaanksssss roh ๐
‘Both with curls’ … delightful poem :o)
aaw..thanks u sweet Deborah ๐
love it,
what a marvel!
Thanks for linking up.
aawww…thanks Ji ๐
and the pleasure is all mine ๐
A bittersweet poem of the fun we too often have to pay back with work. Kids need to be kids for awhile.
thank you cheryl ๐
i have been a complete naughty kid so i guess this one came naturally ๐
awww thsi was soo cute re megz ๐ loved the names too ๐
oiieeee thanks Chudsiiii ๐
Sweet stuff MegZone. Liking yr blog my friend ๐
Warmest Salad
Luke
aaww…thanks Luke ๐
glad to know you like ๐
punishment not so bad…
do u punish ur kids too brian ๐ when they play in the slush
Poor little girls!
Well done poem!
thank you mama zen ๐
Wonderful warm and sweet poem this is, loved it!! Thanks for sharing Megzzzzz xxxx
aww..thanks Amanda ๐ โค โค
Lovely and wonderfully written, cute as well :P~
thank you dear ๐
that was brilliant! loved the rhythm and imagery. fine penned!
aaw..thank you dear Priyanka ๐
Meg, I am thrilled to have you linking up with poetry potluck,
your work is very cute and fun to have…
Happy Friday!
See you next Monday..
Smiles.
aww..thanks Ji ๐
Sweet, busy with red balls of wool… so sweet.
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loved that cute, heart tugging poem.
Gee Meghu… Am loving these children’s poems of yours… too sweet ๐ and really easy to look back too ๐