~::~ Crimson Tears ~::~


pooff.. been away from my blog again ๐Ÿ˜ฆ

Shouldnt say hectic weekend but yes enjoying and chilling out indeed ๐Ÿ™‚

so here’s me back with yet another poem,.. this one’s a sad one though..

I loved the pic and thats wat inspired this poem..

I sit beneath crying clouds

That weep with me, alone

Crimson tears that scream aloud

Rain chills me to the bone

Lost in my own reverie

Waiting for tides to turn

Life seems to be dreary

Solace is all I yearn

.

Days become nights

Only hope lingers

Yet not a tuppence of respite

Faith slipping through fingers

Loneliness grows over

Mind absolutely weary

Agony is all that hovers

Both, clouds & me teary..

~~~~~

I hope you guys liked the poem..

Do lemme know your thoughts…

Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rocking..!! Keep Blogging..!!

Cheerios..!! :mrgreen:

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32 thoughts on “~::~ Crimson Tears ~::~

  1. Beautiful. Very apt with the pic used. specially the last line “Both, clouds & me teary..”

    Just one thing that I felt a little out of place…

    the first 3 lines are in past tense (sat, wept, screamed)… while the rest of the poem is in present tense. I kind of liked the flow more in the present tense. :p Feels like it’s happening right now… like a video I’m watching… u know…

    What do u say?

    • wwooowww..thanks Kadz for pointing out :O
      mere dimmaag mein toh ye baat aayich nai :O
      agli baar se naa will keep in mind..
      infact will try to work on this one too ๐Ÿ˜€

  2. I sit beneath crying clouds
    That weep with me, alone

    I am impressed with the first two lines. Whhooo… too much of emotions packed in these two lines.. nice poem… keep writing !!!

  3. Such loneliness, such sadness…so emotional throughout. A beautiful poem, and a beautiful picture accompanying. They complement and flow from one another splendidly.

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