~::~ Lanes Of Loneliness ~::~


~::~ Lanes of Loneliness ~::~


I

Walked down

Untrodden

Unwinding lanes

Breaking free from menacing worldly chains

Earth, fire, wind, air converge, to my despair

Standing alone

Dry dead leaves

With me

Moan

Tetractys

tetractys is a complete thought written in 20 syllables.1st line 1 syllable, 2nd line 2, 3rd line 3, 4th line 4, 5th line 10 .

A tetractys can also be inverted for a 10, 4, 3, 2, 1 count, and also given the snowflake form โ€“ two verses of complete thought, one in the 1, 2, 3, 4, 10 form, followed by the 10, 4, 3, 2, 1 form.

For the first time I am combining quite a number of meme-prompts together ๐Ÿ˜€

This poem is for Monday Poetry Potluck

http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/10/poetry-potluck-natures-elements-air.html

One Shot Wednesday

http://oneshotpoetry.blogspot.com/

and ABC Wednesdayย  L โ€“ Loneliness/Lanes

http://abcwednesdayround3.blogspot.com/

I hope you liked the poem.. Do let me know your thoughtsโ€ฆ

Thatโ€™s it from Megzone for now..

Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rocking..!! Keep Blogging..!!

Cheerios..!! :mrgreen:

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40 thoughts on “~::~ Lanes Of Loneliness ~::~

  1. Thank for visiting, Meg, and sorry too for the late visit, I am on a deadline roll for my novel ๐Ÿ™‚ as I already set a goal of the date completion, that’s why XD and coming back to the poem, it is once again beautiful and touching, it is hard to walk down a lonely path alone, we do need people beside us at all times to share the joys and sadness =)

  2. dustus says:

    Meg… awesome to see you link up for One Shot! ๐Ÿ™‚ Killer rhyme on “Breaking free from menacing worldly chains” Deep poem using a very restrictive form. (Meg is in the house! Yay!)

    • thank you soo much Adam ๐Ÿ™‚
      i wonder why was i away from One Stop for so long ๐Ÿ™„
      i gues u were right this is simple ๐Ÿ˜€
      yaayyy…looking forward to more ๐Ÿ˜€

  3. A form I have yet to try… you do well here, my friend. Hey I noticed you joined the Poetry Group I run on Facebook. Nice one… well if you’re ever looking for constructive crit proper, that’s where you’ll get it ๐Ÿ™‚

    Nice work

    Luke @ WordSalad

  4. The last comment got mixed up for other friends.. please ignore that..
    เฅ เคจเคฎเคƒ เคถเคฟเคตเคพเคฏ
    Om Namah Shivaya

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