~::~ Lanes of Loneliness ~::~
I
Walked down
Untrodden
Unwinding lanes
Breaking free from menacing worldly chains
Earth, fire, wind, air converge, to my despair
Standing alone
Dry dead leaves
With me
Moan
Tetractys
tetractys is a complete thought written in 20 syllables.1st line 1 syllable, 2nd line 2, 3rd line 3, 4th line 4, 5th line 10 .
A tetractys can also be inverted for a 10, 4, 3, 2, 1 count, and also given the snowflake form – two verses of complete thought, one in the 1, 2, 3, 4, 10 form, followed by the 10, 4, 3, 2, 1 form.
For the first time I am combining quite a number of meme-prompts together 😀
This poem is for Monday Poetry Potluck
http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/10/poetry-potluck-natures-elements-air.html
One Shot Wednesday
http://oneshotpoetry.blogspot.com/
and ABC Wednesday L – Loneliness/Lanes
http://abcwednesdayround3.blogspot.com/
I hope you liked the poem.. Do let me know your thoughts…
That’s it from Megzone for now..
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Cheerios..!! 
Megzone 
4 elements converge,
love the line!
cool piece,
one hits three….
way to go!
aaww..thanks Ji 😀
Hhmm very mysterious, very well written. Thank you Kx
thank you katherine 🙂
I rather like this poem….different than some of the others that address the four elements theme recently….well done!
thank you martin 🙂
m glad you liked it 🙂
I loved the read Megz…thanks for linking with Potluck xx
aaww..thank you so much amanda 😀
the pleasure is all mine 🙂
Thank for visiting, Meg, and sorry too for the late visit, I am on a deadline roll for my novel 🙂 as I already set a goal of the date completion, that’s why XD and coming back to the poem, it is once again beautiful and touching, it is hard to walk down a lonely path alone, we do need people beside us at all times to share the joys and sadness =)
thank you Riikal dear 🙂
all the best for your novel 😀
and hope to read you soon 😀
Great job on the theme! I really liked your poem. The style was amazing too, never knew a style like that existed.
thank you dear 🙂
i too wasnt aware untill recently 🙂
Meg… awesome to see you link up for One Shot! 🙂 Killer rhyme on “Breaking free from menacing worldly chains” Deep poem using a very restrictive form. (Meg is in the house! Yay!)
thank you soo much Adam 🙂
i wonder why was i away from One Stop for so long 🙄
i gues u were right this is simple 😀
yaayyy…looking forward to more 😀
It DOES give a cross-like imagery.
ROG, ABC Wednesday team
thank you so much ROG 😀
glad to be a part of ABC W 😀
A form I have yet to try… you do well here, my friend. Hey I noticed you joined the Poetry Group I run on Facebook. Nice one… well if you’re ever looking for constructive crit proper, that’s where you’ll get it 🙂
Nice work
Luke @ WordSalad
hey Luke 😀
yes i guess i saw that too when you left this comment 😀
untrodden lines – you create such a lonely atmosphere in this short poem and wrap it with the last line…dry dead leaves – with me – moan
thank you claudia dear 🙂
m glad you liked it 🙂
i really like that you end with the moan…walking those roads away from convention are not easy…nice one shot!
hey thank you Brian 😀
yes glad to be on one shot 😀
Technically very strong and poetical so soft and emotional.. good one I liked it.
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Om Namah Shivaya
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thank u shashi 🙂
I enjoyed the wait and liked to … hope is an imposter … thanks for a wonderful thought….
Like it so much..
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
well even if hope is an imposter thats the only thing that keeps you going 🙂
The last comment got mixed up for other friends.. please ignore that..
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
aaw..its alright 🙂
thank you for writing in 🙂
I really liked your pterodactyls, er, tetractys poem.
Nice One Shot!
LOL 😀
you made my poetry into a dinosaur 😀
heeeheehee 😀
thanks for writing in dear 🙂
I’m no judge of poetry, but that’s a very interesting form!
Jay – ABC Wednesday team
thank you so much 😀
glad you stopped by 🙂
gues i am coming here for the first time. luvd this one. bookmarking this page 🙂
thank you dear anil 🙂
its great to know you liked this a lot 😀
that was beautiful.
I have never heard of that style before but you wrote it like a pro.
the last four lines were especially perfect.
Joyce
aaw.. thats sweet of you dear 🙂
m glad to know you liked it..
n m still an amateur at poetry 🙂
this is gorgeous meghna. simply gorgeous. wow! glad to see you posting more regularly.
aaww..thank you soo much trisha..
yep m indeed tryiong to keep up my momentum of posts 🙂
Hey!
we’ve written on same theme! do check mine! am surprised, didn’t think anybody else would be written that!
oh woww..
lemme check yours 🙂
thanks for writing in dear 🙂