~::~ Minerva Melodies ~::~
There she sat on a boat a ‘glide
Ready for another peaceful ride
The night was dark, moon dim
She played the harp, her fingers slim
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A tune mellifluous strings the heart
That a silky gossamer when slithers, imparts
As if the angels come down to earth
Spreading peace which is in dearth
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Golden hair radiant with light
Flowers bloom, a pretty sight!
Enlightened face, blissful smile in trance
Velvety breeze, tree tops dance
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On a silent night, your tune resonates
As feather tingles, touches and sedates
O lady of angelic birth
Your songs fill my heart with mirth
O Minerva play your honeyed melodies
Warmth flows and soul’s at peace
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This is my entry to ABC Wednesday… this week’s letter M = Minerva/ Melodies
http://abcwednesdayround3.blogspot.com/2010/10/m-is-for.html
Also my entry for One Stop Poetry
http://oneshotpoetry.blogspot.com/2010/10/one-shot-poetry-wednesday-week-15.html
I hope you liked my attempt at children’s poem..
Do let me know your thoughts..
Thats it from Megzone for now..
Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rocking..!!! Keep Blogging..!!
Cheeri0s..!!
ah, a beautiful rendering… hear her song as wel through your words…nice One Shot!
aaw..thank you sooo much brian 😀
it is lovely.
ROG, ABC Wednesday team
thanks Rog 😀
What a peaceful and lovely One Shot!
I always enjoy seeing your smile when I visit your blog, Meghana. 🙂
awww.thank you so much Eric
“your tune resonates / As feather tingles, touches and sedates” wow, that’s beautiful, Meg. Nice flow you have going on in this poem. Reason to smile 🙂
aaww…Adam 😀
you always have encouraging words for me 🙂
thank you so much 😀
Beautiful flow to the words…like the fingers on a harp…well done.
awww..thank you so much Martin 🙂
Both picture and poem are lovely…so much emotion.
thank you dear Wanda 🙂
Megzu,
fantastic poems back to back yaar! Am enjoying reading them. Keep ’em coming. Could almost hear the mellifluous melody that her slim fingers were strumming.
Vibzyyyy……..
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thannnnkkk uuuu sooooo much 😀
Very lovely poem.
thank you Rajesh 😀
Lovely Flow
eeeeeeeeee……thanks Prams
I was singing this almost 😀
Mastt hai 😀
I’m a big fan of Minerva… Nice one shot. Love and Light, Sender
keep em coming, said Vibzz but tu to disappeared 😛 where u gone, Megz? 😀 update more more more more more! 😀
umm, u know what I thought of the poem.. so no further additions.. marvellous 🙂
I could use a honeyed melody right now!