no memes this time.. just plain poetry.. thanks to the pic that inspired it π
~::~ Unfulfilled ~::~
I sit under the orange moon bright
That burns with me on a starry night
Waiting by frothy Blue River
Every sound sends a quiver
Fireflies roam scattering dim light
Gnawing breeze mocking my plight
Gazing at a faraway planet
Hope all lost, despair Besets
Silently a flower blooms in darkness
While I wonder why mindβs unrest
Clouds seem to run for covers
While loneliness over me, hovers
Awaiting the arrival of a love- unreal
A face lost under thick fog veil
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i hope you liked the poem.. Do lemme know your thoughts..
Thats it from Megzone for now..
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//Gnawing breeze mocking my plight
Gazing at a faraway planet
Hope all lost, despair Besets
//
itna dukhi kiyu re…
loved the imagery… well written π
dukhi nai re.. aisech likhne ka mann kiya π
thankoooo princess π
The image and the poem work quite well together..nice job.
awww..thanks dear martin π
Megzy, I remember tis feeling completely
“Gnawing breeze mocking my plight” but you have succesfully expressed that feeling through such apt words.
And another beautiful couplet is
” Clouds seem to run for covers
While loneliness over me, hovers”
You are a true romantic re..
Absolutely gorgeous poetry that tugged at my heart!!!!!!!
aawwww….thankss vibbzzyyyy π
you’ve always motivated me with ur comments π
awesome words….sometimes i wonder how so many people harbour da same feeling deep inside
awww…thanks dear abhishek π
Despite the sad theme.
There is a lot of beauty in these words.
it’s a very meaningful poem.
aawww…thanks so much Sev π
masterful job…
thanks Ji π
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/31/halloween-party-at-jingle-poetry-monday-poetry-potluck-tomorrow/
Awards 4 u. xxx
Happy Belated Halloween to you. Our potluck is open, welcome linking,
Old poems, poems unrelated to Halloween are welcome.
Cheers!
You rock!
http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/11/02/the-celebrate-poet-of-september-awards-officially-won-via-votes/
the celebrate poet of September award for you,
plus the honorable mention,
Enjoy!
u rock!
There is beauty that blooms from sorrow.