no memes this time.. just plain poetry.. thanks to the pic that inspired it π
~::~ Unfulfilled ~::~
I sit under the orange moon bright
That burns with me on a starry night
Waiting by frothy Blue River
Every sound sends a quiver
Fireflies roam scattering dim light
Gnawing breeze mocking my plight
Gazing at a faraway planet
Hope all lost, despair Besets
Silently a flower blooms in darkness
While I wonder why mindβs unrest
Clouds seem to run for covers
While loneliness over me, hovers
Awaiting the arrival of a love- unreal
A face lost under thick fog veil
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i hope you liked the poem.. Do lemme know your thoughts..
Thats it from Megzone for now..
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//Gnawing breeze mocking my plight
Gazing at a faraway planet
Hope all lost, despair Besets
//
itna dukhi kiyu re…
loved the imagery… well written π
dukhi nai re.. aisech likhne ka mann kiya π
thankoooo princess π
The image and the poem work quite well together..nice job.
awww..thanks dear martin π
Megzy, I remember tis feeling completely
“Gnawing breeze mocking my plight” but you have succesfully expressed that feeling through such apt words.
And another beautiful couplet is
” Clouds seem to run for covers
While loneliness over me, hovers”
You are a true romantic re..
Absolutely gorgeous poetry that tugged at my heart!!!!!!!
aawwww….thankss vibbzzyyyy π
you’ve always motivated me with ur comments π
awesome words….sometimes i wonder how so many people harbour da same feeling deep inside
awww…thanks dear abhishek π
Despite the sad theme.
There is a lot of beauty in these words.
it’s a very meaningful poem.
aawww…thanks so much Sev π
masterful job…
thanks Ji π
Awards 4 u. xxx
Happy Belated Halloween to you. Our potluck is open, welcome linking,
Old poems, poems unrelated to Halloween are welcome.
Cheers!
You rock!
the celebrate poet of September award for you,
plus the honorable mention,
Enjoy!
u rock!
There is beauty that blooms from sorrow.