This is for Leo’s Z-A in 26 Days
Alphabet J = Journey
~::~ Journey ~::~
Juggled along a dreary road
Oblivious to the world, I strode
Under the façade of a cheery smiles
Restless I walk and walk for miles
No I don’t stop, even if I am tired
Engulfed in a spell, I tread uninspired
Youth to moksha, it’s a long wandering of unfizzled hope
I hope you liked the fiction . please do lemme know your thoughts..
Thats it from Megzone for now…
Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rockin…!! Keep Blogging..!!
25 thoughts on “~::~ Journey ~::~”
“unfizzled hope” that’s just got to be Biblical, ahuh! 🙂
aahaa.. though that wasnt the idea 😉
Absolutely marvellous Megz. The flow of thought was so smooth and beautiful. ” youth to Moksha” it really is a long wandering, isn’t it?! What a matured thought…
Megz just this one thing Ive spotted all through out you talk in a present continuous tense..The word ‘strode’should be replaced by ‘stride’ in keeping with the tense maintained..:)
Hope you dont mind my pointing out!!!!
thankoooo vibbbzzyyyy 😀 😀 😀
in sab ke baare mein zyada toh pata nai 😀 jo pata wo likh daala 😛
Awesome Acrostic this! Well said!
thank purvi 😀
i absolutely adore this piece! really! I wish you would post the link to it in my wish jar!!! 🙂 LOVE IT!!!!!!!
thanks Kellie.. m glad you liked it
beautiful, Megz.. thats an awesome acrostic surely 🙂
thanks leo 😀
Nice journey, Megz.
thank you dear Curtis 😀
This is beautifully done.. loved it..
thank you ramesh 😀
Well done. It’s simplicity gives it strength!
thank you Susan 😀
Reminds me to try an acrostic, myself.
oh please do dear :d
and do lemme know would love to read yours too 😀
just splendid meg, its always a great joy to read your works.
aww thanks trisha :d
u r always great with words 😀
Glad to see you in.
thanks JI 😀
as always the pleasure and honour is mine 😀
Seeking liberty is a good hope.
and well sometimes the seek is worthwhile 😀
i ADORE this! i love the style and the whimsy to it! beautiful entry to potluck!