~::~ Journey ~::~




This is for Leo’s Z-A in 26 Days

http://leonnyes.wordpress.com/

Alphabet J = Journey

~::~ Journey ~::~

 

Juggled along a dreary road

Oblivious to the world, I strode

Under the façade of a cheery smiles

Restless I walk and walk for miles

No I don’t stop, even if I am tired

Engulfed in a spell, I tread uninspired

Youth to moksha, it’s a long wandering of unfizzled hope

~::~::~::~

I hope you liked the fiction . please do lemme know your thoughts..

Thats it from Megzone for now…

Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rockin…!! Keep Blogging..!!

Cheerios..!!

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25 thoughts on “~::~ Journey ~::~

  1. Absolutely marvellous Megz. The flow of thought was so smooth and beautiful. ” youth to Moksha” it really is a long wandering, isn’t it?! What a matured thought…
    Megz just this one thing Ive spotted all through out you talk in a present continuous tense..The word ‘strode’should be replaced by ‘stride’ in keeping with the tense maintained..:)
    Hope you dont mind my pointing out!!!!
    XOXOXO

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