~::~ You ~::~


I am super duper late and almost on the verge of hitting the deadline 😦

but Ji has been superduper-sweet and a complete Angel and has been very considerate and accomodating in accepting my late entry into the Thursday Poets Rally 33

http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/11/17/agreement-4-thursday-poets-rally-week-33-participants/

I never wanted to be away but some recent developments had me travelling for over a week.. Leo was kind enough to let me schedule all my poems so i dont miss much on his Z-A in 26 days and thankfully he dint mind me putting haikus, naisaikus and acrostics continuously and that only eased my entries there..

but Thursday Rally has been really special for me.. Cos Ji if you hadnt discovered me i dont think i would have improved so much as a POET (if i can call myself one) with so much exposure to other poets and memes πŸ˜€

and hence every poem for the rally is a special composition and this one again is no different..

~::~ You ~::~


I can see my dreams come true..

In the ocean of your eyes..

Like Sapphires they shine so blue

Make me break all wordly ties..

.

I can see my desires burn bright

In the vastness of your love

As dispels darkness – the sunlight..

You’re my angel from heavens above..

.

I can feel my pain wash away..

When you take me in your arms

As have vanished cloud covers- grey..

And silenced my internal storms

.

You are all I want

You are all I need

Your name is what I chant..

Your words are all I heed..

~::~::~::~

 

 

I hope you all like this..

please do lemme know your thoughts..

Thats it from Megzone for now…

Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rockin…!! Keep Blogging..!!

Cheerios..!!

 

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26 thoughts on “~::~ You ~::~

  1. This is sweet,
    you are a bright star at poets rally all the time,
    love your cheerful sentiments in your poem,
    and your kind mention means a lot to me.

    you are always welcome to poets rally and to jingle poetry potluck…

    Thanks for the extraordinary contribution here.
    Happy Rally!
    πŸ™‚

  2. I like, very nice except that chant and want do not rhyme if that is what you were going for. You asked for an opinion I hope it is okay to say so. Despite that, I like, very nice!

    • thank you dear πŸ™‚
      and yes everyone is free to give me an honest opinion πŸ˜€
      and yes i agree chant and want may not rhyme in the exact syllabic way but i like the rhythm they bring into the poem and hence the usage πŸ˜€

    • oh Sev m jus an average poet trust me..
      you guys are jusss waaayyyy toooo gooodd πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€
      i still do practice that music-poem thing of urs to break my writers block at times…
      and yes to bring us all together Jingle is really an angel πŸ˜€

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