Bringing forth another new form of poetry called the Lanturne
The Lanturne is a five-line verse shaped like a Japanese lantern with a syllabic pattern of one, two, three, four, one.
For more info and examples you could check http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/lanturne.html
So here’s trying my hand at Lanturne but ofkoss I have coupled 2-3 lanturnes together making it a Tri-Lanturne 😀
~::~ Cold Night ~::~
Blowing
Across lands.
Lonely it shines,
Moon
.
Solo,
She stands
Splendid poise
Embracing cool
Breeze
.
Calm
Midnight
Enfolds in
Gentle zephyr
Dreams
~::~::~::~
That’s it from Megzone for now..
Keep Smiling…!! Keep Rocking..!! Keep Blogging…!!
Cheerios
Very beautiful poem..enjoyed reading it.
thank you dear Martin 🙂
its a pleasure reading your comments 😀
Loved teh 2nd para 🙂 niceee 🙂
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raji ko bhi wahi accha laga 😀
usko pehle bheja tha naa review ke liye 😀
nice one meghzyyyy.. how do u find the words .. some i have not even used ever …
I learn new words here now …
eeee 😀 Bikky brooooo 😀
kaise ho 😀
long time no see 🙄
heheheeh accha hai naa aapki dictionary improving 😀
Lovely..
I could feel the wind blowing through my heart.. 🙂
thank you Sumit 🙂
Awesommmmmmmmmmmme! Splendid one! Loved it! Am a fan! :))
aawww..thanks Purvi :d
m glad you liked it so much…
Midnight dreams are always mesmerizing.
Dreaming and standing in midnight means a lot.
Very well done.
thank you very much 😀
midnight dreams are indeed the most serene 😀
This is too good.. Awesome.. Thanks for introducing this form to me..
Someone is Special
hey Sarav 😀
thanks for stopping by glad to know you like this 😀
wow megz its beautiful…..i loved it……
hey iti 😀
tjhankoooooo sooo mch 😀
Very well expressed Dear.. Wonderfully written..
I like the Blog Template as well.. It’s always nice to read your work with a little description of the form too.. 🙂
That’s how Leos are- LOLsss
I swayed with the words 😀
Hugs xox
hey thanks olivia 😀
its great to see you here 😀
Yo! we Leos 😉 rock dont we 😛 😛
It has been a while, hope that you have a promising and fulfilling 2011 ahead.
We have enjoyed your support in 2010, a great big thanks here, cheers!
We will have our 17th potluck beginning this Sunday, Hope to see you in.
http://www.jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/
our theme this week is: “the road ahead”, but you are welcome to share old poems or poems unrelated to our theme..
The more you share, the happier we are…
You have been a gem to our community, keep shining with your fabulous talent and have fun!
Very well expressed Dear.. Wonderfully written..
Hugs xox
i have submitted 2 of my old ones for this one 😀
Very well expressed Dear.. Wonderfully written..
Hugs xox
geee thanks olivia 😀
It has been a while, hope that you have a promising and fulfilling 2011 ahead.
We have enjoyed your support in 2010, a great big thanks here, cheers!
We will have our 17th potluck beginning this Sunday, Hope to see you in.
http://www.jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/
our theme this week is: “the road ahead”, but you are welcome to share old poems or poems unrelated to our theme..
The more you share, the happier we are…
You have been a gem to our community, keep shining with your fabulous talent and have fun!
yes dear have given my 2 old poems 😀
it’s so cute the poem 🙂
u are still a child 😛
hehehehe 😀 thank you Harshika 😀
im sorry im meant a really nice poem… cut out the word cute
areeeee kyu tension leti ho 😀
its ok 😀
That looks like it would be a fun form.
You did a great job with these three.
Nice simple imagery
wow 😀
thanks Sev 😀
I’ve never heard of that kind of poetry before. Thanks for opening my eyes to different forms! Looks like I’ll have to make a few myself.
aww….that was sweet of you Dear 😀
please do try and let me know 😀
Lovely image you created here, that’s a neat format too. Enjoyed the dreamy read!
http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/01/24/dark-teen/
thank you dear jessica 🙂
Cool style and a cool piece.
thank you dear…
lovely 🙂
thank you Scott 😀