Awrigghtttyyyy… the previous post was 300 and was a romantic poem to bring in the valentine mood π
AND today I mellow down a bit… a bit of retrospect.. and well.. wat can I say..
I dunno how to explain this poem.. but then.. this is it..!!
read it and lemme know your thoughts…
~::~ Life Re-starts ~::~
Another year
Another time
A slight fear
For the same mime
A wish unfulfilled
A desire incomplete
A heart strong willed
To never accept defeat
A fight sublime
Heartbeats surreal
A song in rhyme
A prattling spiel
Yearnings of eternity
Periods of despair
Borne with dexterity
Though unfair
A hope in heart
A smile on face
Life re-starts
Dawn embraced
Another expedition
Steps retraced
Another mission
Begins with grace!!!
~::~::~::~
Thats it from Megzone for now..!!
Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rocking..!! Keep Bloggingβ¦!!
Cheerios..!!
Really like the positive expression of hope in the poem.
thanks martin π
full of hope.. niceeee π
thnksss…
theres no life without hope π
Nice one …. π
thank u uncle π
I loved the way this tripped along, a cascade of ideas!
‘prattling spiel’ – great phrase.
http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/02/14/valentine-card/
heyyy thanks Jessica π
m glad you liked it so much π
Nice one!
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thanks Anna π
THANKS FOR SHARING. THIS WAS GREAT, I ENJOYED IT ALL ALONG.
thank you dear…
m glad you liked it
cute…
Glad to see you beam with wit and joy.
Happy Potluck.
A++
thanks Ji π
this is contagious meg.. here’s my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/05/11/happily-tied/
hey kris.. thanks so much π
sure checkin out urs π
great writing meg.. here’s my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/05/11/happily-tied/
thanks Kris.. hopping on to urs sooonn…
Fresh beginings
to make new mistakes
and learn new things.
Loved the positive spirit… rock on!
aaww…thank you very much π