~::~ Dont Weep My Lady ~::~
O dear lady do not weep
Your tears are wasted in vain
Heartless souls, no feelings deep
Yet, for them you cry in pain
Your forlorn tears don’t even seep
Bleak their minds, who should be slain
They know not how to take care of thee
O dear lady, just let them be..
~::~::~::~
Hope you guys liked this poem…
This is my entry for the the Thursday Poets Rally –
http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.blogspot.com/2011/02/agreement-for-thursday-poets-rally-week.html
i hope you guys liked it.. do let me know your thoughts….
Thats it from Megzone for now..
Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rocking..!! Keep Blogging..!!
Cheerioss..!!
loved the flow of the poem… nice form
mast likhi re 😀
mai bhi try maarungi 😀
hehehehe 😀
thaaankkss raji 😀
form try kar rahi thi syllable count karna bhul gayi 😛
to aiwey daal di 😛 😛
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woweeeee…awesome re….:) pics really do inspire u!!
thanksss Roomiee 😀
heartfelt, the imagery is stunning…
Thanks.
Happy Rally.
use my wordpress blog post to comment so far.
Appreciate your patience.
thank yiou sooo much Ji 😀
and m glad Rally is backkk 😀
Yeah, we’re a sorry lot. : (
yes indeed thingy.. thanks for stopping by
Wonderful. I also like the message behind this poem!
thank you dear… m lad you liked ti
Wow .. what a Poem… Loved the description….Wonderful take on nature and rain 😀
thanks krithikaa 😀
m glad you stopped by and you enjoyed it 😀
It is difficult not to react to current events. It is lovely when done in verse.
thnak you Mike 🙂
m glad you liked it..
The structure and poise is what is so good about this poem! Nice job!
thk you vishwas.. m glad you liked it 🙂
cheerios!!! lol
I like it, a kind admonishment to a tender soul, nicely handled!
Happy rally! 🙂
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/02/16/to-spring-the-fall-must-come/
thank you lynna m glad you liked it
great advice my friend.. here’s mine for week 38.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/09/30/i-cant-hold-it/
thanks Kris 🙂
coming to urs soon :d
thks for droppin by
Masttt hai 🙂 tu kase itni aasani se likh leti hai :-s
aasaani se :O :O
abeee kitna time laga ye topic sochne ko :S
fir pic uthaayi aur lih daali jhatt se 😛
A very Nice Poetry.. 😉
Here’s mine STUFF
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2011/01/26/the-democratic-rap/
!! Happy Rally !!
thank you ashbee 😀
coming to urs soon 🙂
beautiful flow….
thanks Sam 🙂
Beautifully melancholic and powerfully poigniant.
The Lonely Recluse.
thaaankkk uuuuu so muchhhh.. m glad m liked it…
Dear Meghana
I liked this one and specially the last two lines were so full of emotions…
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/01/whispers-wanderer.html
Twitter @VerseEveryDay
thank you Shashi.. m glad you liked them 🙂
lovely structure . felt mother earth crying.. touching image too.
thank you dear …
m glad you liked it
Descriptive and beautiful, Meg.
JP
http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/02/17/truth-be-known/
thank u dear.. m glad you liked it… shall visit urs soon
a tribute to indian women…
thanks Anil..
a tangent way of lookin at the poem indeed 🙂
Deeply touching poem! Nice one!
thanks Paulo..
m glad you liked it
short and sweet. nice job.
Cha
http://chaspalette.wordpress.com/2011/01/21/the-bitter-end/
thank you Cha 🙂
m glad you liked it…
Ah, our tears wasted on people who did not deserve them would fill oceans. Lovely poem. Thanks and thanks for visiting me, too. Hugs, pat
thank you pat 🙂
m glad you like them 🙂
awesome poem Meghana.. No more words..
Someone is Special
hey thank you Saravana 😀
m glad you liked it..
Heartless souls, no feelings deep,
There is no reason to weep.
Great poem. Thanks for sharing.
thank you dan.. m glad you enjoyed it..
Ah, the tears of a forlorn soul, always a raw and emotional chord to strike because we have all been there. Fantastic work with this offering, I could feel the tears coming and thanks so much for sharing!
thank you Leiffy i am glad you enjoyed it 🙂
Beautiful poem loved it 🙂
Here’s mine
http://hindawy.wordpress.com/2011/02/04/the-right/
thank you hindawy m glad you liked it
Very powerful..
and a lovely picture…
“Your forlorn tears don’t even seep”…love this line 🙂
thank you sumit 🙂
m glad you liked it
Meg, this is very encouraging for us…but a tear or two won’t do any harm…let them fall to ease us of the pain, right?
hey amity.. thnk you so muhc..
it wud ease our pains indeed.. but the outcome might not change dear…. at the end the tears wud dry up but ppl wud remain the same..
hmm, some tears always are there, yet if the lady isn’t strong enough to wipe them, who’ll hold her hand and wipe it for her in support?
there is no one to ever wipe those tears 😀 thats why i said dont weep my lady 😉 cos no point 😛 😛
yeah ! O dear lady, just let them be..
loved the rhythm and flow.. nice work again !!
thank you Sachin… nice to see you back on my blog 🙂
I could feel the passion with which you said these words. Very moving. Great work!