~::~ Still There Is Time ~::~
Sometimes life
Ties you
In myriad
Loose ends
Ludicrous!
.
Trundling down
Hung over
Every moment
Reverberating
Elemental subsistence
.
Inertia
Surrenders
.
Till finally
In exactness
Momentous opulent
Existence reveals
~::~::~::~
I hope you liked my Acrostic π
and this ones for Jingle’s Thursday Poets Rally week 40..
http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.blogspot.com/2011/03/agreement-for-thursday-poets-rally-40.html
Do lemme know your thoughts on this π
Thats it on Megzone for now..!!
Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rockingg..!! Keep Blogging..!!
and for now Keep Rallying..!!!! π
cheerios…!!!!
udii baaabaaaa kiyaaa high funda thoughts on existance and life… baaprree π
ekdum mast… and very different from your usual write π
heeheehee π π π
thaankkkuuu princess π
best idea for me is to say I agree with Raji π nice one Meghu.. I didnt know you were soooo philosophical.. π
do come read my rally post too π its a triolet..
http://leonnyes.wordpress.com/2011/03/23/two-ways/
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thankoooooo π π
That’s very creative. I liked it very much. π
eeeeeeeee π thanks Neths π
smiles, it is Poets Rally for Jingle, Vinay, and more..
apt acrostics, well done.
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thank u Ji π
Ah..very nice indeed.
thank you martin π
Good job, life and time always play off of each other in a grand ballet of eternity! Have to try one someday.
sure do try Paulo π
wud be happy to read one of ur acrostics π
This is perfect Megs…you have brought out the real essence of the phrase in a very enchanting acrostic form…:)
LOvely! Good morning Mhegs!!!
thank you Amity π
m mighty glad you liked it π
Nicely done! becca
thank you dear Becca π
how is your day?
please find time visiting poets who were here for you but you did not visit yet..
Thanks..
have fun. π
let us know after you are done …
Sure Ji i hv done with 18 will do with all my commenters soon π
looks like a good poem gone bad due to restrictions ..
I am sure you can write better .
not sure of the restrictions but i do love every form π
..And when inertia surrenders..
(:
got no more to say, just love this line.
thanks you Shagufta π
Well done acrostic. I like the short lines/phrases that propel you through the poem–a cohesive thought.
thank you dear π m glad you liked it
Ah, I absolutely love your word choice! Like someone else said, I think the short lines really just get the heart pushing forward, and it ends just so well! You’ve inspired me to do an acrostic sometime as well!
aawww… thank you dear π
This acristic is an absolute linguistic delight, you know. π
Fascinating!Thanks for sharing.
thank you Yelena π
Oh sorry I meant acrOstic of course (late night already here, a bit sleepy)))
aaahh thats ok π i thought so π
Still there is time…. π
wonderful poem… optimistic!
thank you very much π
nice one
thank you very much dear π
yes..still there is time..Wonderfully written
aaww..thank you very much Uma π
What a cute philosophy. Shallow waters run deep. This is my first time reading you and I will be back.
thank u Iris π
i hope shall come again π
this is one is awesome and so profound!!! loved it!!!
thanks roomie π
what a creative and wonderful poem! I enjoyed reading it quite a bit π thank you for sharing!!
thank andie π
Back here after sometime – nice to catch up on your work – good stuff as usual.
thank you Gyanban π loong time since i saw u here π
Nice acrostic poem!
thank you Curtis