weeeeeeeeee…………..the Rally is here again…Β π
and boy o boy… i won the perfect poet again,… yaayyy…………
yes yess yess… Ji the sweetest Ji presented me the Perfect Poet Award Week 22
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/06/11/thursday-poets-rally-week-22-the-perfect-poet-award/
yaayyyy…………!!! Thanks Ji π
and i would like to nominate RAJI for her breath-taking shape poetry.. to me she’s the tragedy queen of poetry π
And here is my poem for this week’s rally..!!
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~::~ A Stroll Through Neverland ~::~
Deep dark woods
Without any hoods
I trudge along
Itβs where I belong..
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Scent of aromatic herbs
Silence! Nothing perturbs
Peculiar chirpy crickets
Freshly blossomed rose thickets…
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Swirling gloomy thick mist
Uncanny eeriness exists
Mermaids swimming in mid-lake
Ambling around duck & drake…
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Foliage of multi-hued flowers
Tall shady tree towers
Leprechauns scurrying around
Spirits soaring unbound..
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Shadowy creeping sun beams
Glistening water streams
Ambience infused magic spells
Fairies hidden in blue-bells…
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Land of enchantments
Centaurs play portents
Charms & beauty, this realm adorns
My abode of magical creatures & unicorns…
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Do lemme know how you guys found thisβ¦
Thats it from Megzone for now..!!!
Keep Smiling..! Keep Rocking..!! Keep Bloggingβ¦!!
Cheerios..!!
hey very beautiful and wonderful image of thefantasy u created there.. Loved reaidng it
weeeeeeeeeeeee………..sushy…
first comment π
thaaankkkk uuuu π
What beautiful magical imagery, gave me a light and happy feeling, lovely.
aawwwww….thanks Suzi….
that was sweet of you π
Wow… awesome dreamy stuff Megsss! π
Megs in Neverland!!! π hehe π
aaawww…..thankksss…. Roh π
//Ji presented me the Perfect Poet Award Week 22// yaayyy Congratsssssssss π
/ yaayyy Congratsssssssss /
yaayyyy…….thankkiiess π
absolutely charming!
aaww…thanks dear π
Great lines and flow, Meg. “Mermaids swimming in mid-lake /
Ambling around duck & drake⦔ Wow, so many great lines to a magical theme! That one is pure music. Your poetry is awesome, as always. cheers
aaww….thankksss Adam… you are always generous words for me π
land of fairytale bliss- good work meg!
heyyy….thank you verryy much π
lovely imagery, great rhyming , a wonderful poem.well done Meg.
hey thanks Abder… π
wow, i loved this! I have a warm heart and a big smile on my face! Thanks!
aawww…thank you lynn… m glad you liked it π
beautifullll imagery…
and loved those bluebells wala part…
kaash aise jagah rehne milta yaar ….
awesome write π
i swear aisi jagah mil jaaye tho main tho shahid ko bhi bhul jaaoo π
kkiieekkiieekiiie
thankkiess princess π
lovely images.
you are sweetest,
thank you for writing a magical, fun, and pleasant poem!
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awwww….thanks JI…
thanks to you mainly for having discovered me and introduced me to the rally.. π
Congratsssssssssssss π
n masttt poem
i felt as if i was in that land π mastttttttt fantasia π
oiiiiii thankss oi chudel π
aaja dono saath mein unicorn par ghoda gaadi khelte hai π
Lovely words… can see why you belong there…great imagery! Heartspell
aaww…thank you dear heartspell.. yeasss i really wish i could be there π
Thanks for stopping by! This is soo enchanted! I felt like I was really there in Neverland π
thank you Jstar…glad to know you feel enchanted π
That’s a beautiful painting Meghz :))))))))
Loved it!
Seems like you guys are having a whole lot of fun on the external space…? hmmm…
eeeeee….Alpy… good to see you babes π
oh yesss…. lots of fun on external too π
you shud join us π
thankkiiess for writing in π
I like that you paint a picture and take me on journey with you.
aaww….thats sweet of you thank you dear π
You have such talent…and congratulations:) Love your work oxo
aaww…thanks Buttercup π
love ur work too π
Niiiicccceee! thanks for sharing I look forward to checking out ur future post!
heyyy….thanks Ms peaches.. m glad you liked them.. and yes im looking forward to your more of your visits on my blog π
we all need to believe in fairy tales sometimes. :] cool poem, and congrats on the award:]
yesz indeed JoeSuzz.. if there were no fairytales we wud never be able to be the CHILD we were π
whimsical. nice -hernamewaslaughter
thank you dear π
A fantastic description of a fantastic world.
thank you morganna π
beautiful poem
heyyy thanks Sev π
why i found it through you…and i would never mis a trip to neverland…smiles. second star to the right and sail on til mornin…you have created quite the fantasy…
aawww….thanks Brian π
m glad you took the trip to Neverland with me π
yes
i hope you liked it nelly π
Meg I think I live in all those enchanted places…. it is hard to live them and walk in the real world…bkm
Thank you BKM… yes indeed we all live in those enchanted places at some point or the other π
thanks for dropping by π
Your imagery is amazing! I felt like I was in the enchanted world you were describing! Nicely done!
aawww…thanks dear π
im glad you liked it π
Where is this beautiful labyrinthine world you describe. I long to frolic with your fairies and dance with solemn leprechauns. Nice Meg
aawwww….katherine… m on the hunt myself… π
This is my first read of your work…I like your style.
Just Say’n
thank you tracy… m glad you liked it π
beautiful… mere ko bhi sikha do kaise likhte hain PLEASEeeeeeeeeeeeeee na
kyaa kaise likhte hai :O
An enchanting mystical magical land — a delightful read. Love this poem.
Joanny
heyyy thanks Joan π
m glad you liked it π
love fantasies – birlliantly portrayed!
great going buddy!
weeeeee…………thanks Dish π
glad you liked it… π
im waiting for ur poem alert π
Please return favors to poets who were here,
Thank you in advance…
everyone needs encouragement…
Happy Friday!
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Sure Ji π
on my way π
Happy Friday to you too π
this was gorgeous Meg. simply gorgeous. π
aawww…thanks trisha π
thats sweet of you π
Beautiful are the words as beautiful the soul is.. π
aaww..thaankkss Tamzy.. D:
the imagery is beautiful ! (:
girl i’ve become a fan of yours!
thank you Shaguftaji π
im glad you liked it π
shagufta ji?! π i like it! π
who wouldn’t? its awesome! (:
Congratulations on winning again. Well done:)
Awww thank you buttercup π
loved the imagery meg π how lovely
heyyy…thanks Noha π
Hi… It made me feel like Alice in Wonderland (or Neverland) π
hey thanks Satyakam… im glad you got the effect π
welcome to Megzone and i hope you keep visiting :d
Thank you for the participation,
all 5 awards to take from…
No rally next week.
Great stuff, MegZone… thanks for the visit, by the way…
hey I see you’re on Facebook… i run a poetry group on there where we post, enjoy and critique each others’ work (proper critique, not just ego-strokes)… helps us learn really fast as writers. Here’s the link if you’re interested. I only invite ppl I think might fit in.
http://www.facebook.com/group.php?gid=107480952604804
Cheers
Luke
Great writing!! wonder if it wont even be better if you left us with more of yourself in the poetry….great fantasy but lacks the fire the comes from “emotional” poems …. but having said that i luv your theme and will be learning from this and any others you may have….an aspiring writer