~::~ Sleep Walking ~::~


I wonder what had gotten into me… :roll:

words that once freely flowed like water are now harder to catch…

anyways.. Thursday is here :)

and so is the Rally…

Yep Jingle is back with the Thursday Poets Rally this weekk.. all you poets out there do check out the Rally site and join in :)

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/09/22/thursday-poets-rally-week-29-sept-23-29/

and this time.. again i am back with a poem..

well not exactly a poem but its a HAIKU :D

yep dabbling in haiku again.. haiku masters spare me the rod cos i am still learning the ropes of the poetic forms…

~::~ Sleep-walking ~::~


Lost in dreams he walked

Backwards retraced steps asleep

Tripped and fell head first

I hope you liked this haiku.. Do lemme know your thoughts..

Thats it from Megzone for now..

Keep smiling..!! Keep Rocking..!! Keep Blogging…!!

Cheerios..!! :mrgreen:

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77 thoughts on “~::~ Sleep Walking ~::~

    • lol :D leoooo
      will ask him how his head feels :P
      and no i dint cheat on the he/she part :P
      it was indeed a HE :P
      why.. cos only men are idiosyncratic :P
      heeheheheh :D

  1. Loved your haiku. I have never been able to express myself in such elegance so swiftly. Conjures up a picture that is both nuanced and beautiful. Very enjoyable to read then daydream about.

    crb.

    • aaaainggg….. :shock:
      watchu doing on my blog :O
      its been wat eeoonnsss since i saw u here :roll:
      anyways thankiiiess a bunch :D

      oh well men are more idiosyncratic than us women ;)
      we are more sophisticated u see we dont sleep walk :P
      so well thats ur answer and thanks for writing in :D

  2. 700miles says:

    i really enjoy haiku…. i like that this can be interpreted literally….somebody stumbling around or look at it in a deeper way, like how we subconsciously re-construct our past, and sometimes will fall head first right back into the old routines / problems /situations… just my take. fun haiku. take good care.

    • wooww..thats a wonderful insight dear ;)
      though i had definitely not planned it in that way.. but i like the way you look at things :)
      thank you soo much for writing in dear :)
      happy rally :D

  3. Very nice…. specially as I like haiku’s a lot… thanks for sharing…

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  4. though i got the essence of the haiku u have written but am yet to appreciate this form of poetry..
    gotta read about it first.. this much i know that its actually a japanese from, but widely used in english these days..
    nice one..

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    please return favors to those who are here..
    Happy Tuesday!

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