Ok now this is something that struck me when I was plundering the cyber lands for some ideas for the next post/poem… I am not sure if this form of poetry is generally available… I just happened to come across tongue twisters in my journey of greener pastures when… Toinnngg…!!! I got a bulb in my head (not the bulby bulb u sillies this is the idea bulb 😛 ) and I thought why not create a new form of poetry called the tongue twister poetry..
Funda is very simple…. The lines should be tongue-twister-ish and ofcourse it should be poetic 😉
So here’s my first experiment at creating a form of poetry in true blue Megzy style… 😀
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Rainy Night
Swishy swashy waves washing sea shores..
Splattering spluttering slowly foam scours..
Rumbling rambling whooshing, wave roars..
Cackling clashes cracking rocky cores..
Gushing winds growl, grumbling giddy..
Thumping tumbles every trembling tree..
Slashing splashing rushes rain..
Whizzing whooping plunking on window pane…
Sitting on stairs, staring stars at night..
Melting mellow in murmuring moonlight..
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I hope you guys had a lovely time reading this tongue-twister-y poem….. 😀
Do lemme know your thoughts as they are vital to keep me reinventing and motivating to search for better untrodden paths…
This is my entry to Jingle’s Thursday Poetry Rally.. Albeit a day in advance.. 🙂 I felt this was perfect for it 😀
Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rocking..!!! Keep Blogging…!!!
Cheerios…!! 
Megzone 
Really toungue twister.. kitna difficult hian padhna 😀
abeee tune tho tongue ke spelling mein twist kar diyaa 😛
kkiieekkiieekkiiee
Really ncie…oops see I twisted my tongue 😛
very creative.
But please your word ‘toing’ made me think of that awful awful advertisment….(http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kx9HejVzHDI) see it on youtube
hehehhe
lolszz… 😀
glad to know you got twisted alright..
oopss ur scaring me shall check out that video 😉
thanks dear 🙂
smart twister!
awww…thanks jingle..
I hope its not a problem in putting up a day in advance 🙂
twisted my tongue to oblivion alright haha! hey where you got this idea from? true blue meg style and original..
aaww…. poor you.. 😀
i dunno i was just surfing the web wondering wat new to write when i happened to come across an old tongue twister and i thot why not 😉
and well this is my try 😀
Wooooooow!! That was super duper Megzzz! 😀
Loved it… semma ‘Innovative’ 😉
and the words were also in sync… I mean nothing out of place inspite of the constraints…
Semma.. 🙂
awww…thankkiieee thankkiiee.. 😀
/and the words were also in sync… I mean nothing out of place inspite of the constraints…/
yepp tooo muych sweat went into creating this one 😉
everything is perfect, no worry.
I like your twister poem post,
words splash and squish and they have fun…
Happy Thursday!
😉
awwww…thanks Jingle.. you are the sweetest indeed 🙂
So very clever…I will have to practice saying this one out loud a few more times before getting it right. 🙂
lolzz… do try martin..
and lemme know if you get it right 😉
its good..
*Mind-Blastic* Poem as in Russell Peters ishtyle… 😛 It blasted my mind.. 😀
lolzz..
purze collect kar liyo bacche..
fir shayad naa mile 😉
I like tongue-twisters.
glad to know you liked them Anthony 😀
do keep visiting 😀
good thing it is my tongue that is tied and not my fingers…lol. so much fun!
lol…thannks brian..
I hope you were able to untangle your twisted tongue 😛
lol, cool.
But guess what.
didn’t twist my tongue.
i read it at a snails pace
aaahhhh….thats cheating Sev… 😦
you should read it a good pace… whats the fun in tongue twisting if its read slowly…
Betty Bought Some Butter..the butter was very bitter..so she bought some better butter to make the bitter butter better…please repeat in one breath:):)..
whew..ok..that was just a memory of my school days..
Great job Megzy as ever..take care..
oi..thats gotten a lil stale re… 😉
thats why this brand new idea 💡
im glad you liked it pri..
take care you too 😀
*untwists tongue* That was a little twisty,
😛
teehee good job
awwww…. poorrrr you 🙂
i hope your tongue’s all fine now 😀
super duper cooool…wait let me first untangle my tongue…oooohhh my fingeres are tangled too….hhhheeeeellllpppp!
aawwww…. i hope your tongue and fingers are all right now..
Glad you liked it Nalini..
Do keep visiting 🙂
its a pleasure to have you here 😀
I have a cross cultures award for you dear Meg 🙂
http://nohaemile.wordpress.com/2010/02/17/more-happy-awards/
awww…thank you sooo much Noha 😀
I can’t speak out the words but twisted my mental tongue, lol
This is a beauty, you’re great
aawww…thank you dear…
I’m glad you liked it sooooo much 🙂
I really liked it! Twisty and daunting yet the scenery is present and the poetry clever! Great stuff!
aaaww…thanks Tristan..
good to know you liked it 🙂
Glad to have you on my space..
do keep visiting 🙂
I just had to come back for a second read… Such brilliance
aawwww…that was sooo very really sweet of you..
its nice to knwo when people really liked your work and enjoy it..
thank you sooo much dear 🙂
My tongue is all tied up, but this was quite a delight! Loved the picture as well…images in your poem are intriguing!
lol…
i hope your tongue is better now 😀
i try to match the pics as much as possible..
sometimes they just fall into place.. :d
thanks for dropping in and glad you liked it dear…
Do keep visiting 🙂
It looks like fun to write / but not to recite / lol / Thanks 🙂
lol…
Adam you just did a couplet poetry there.. 😀
glad you liked it.. and pls do try to recite it 😉
Nutty witty poem that sounds so great!
Willy nilly made me a fan infact.
Pitter patter sounds of the rain
Slushy messy ground trips you again.
I like this! Lol
hey…that was really good…
pretty tongue-twistery indeed..
thanks for dropping by and do keep visiting 😀
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/03/10/i-want-my-old-friends-back-awards/
a poetry award for you.
thank you for the beautiful mind!
awwww…thanks Ji..
you are indeed an angel 🙂
sweetest of all 😀
Very fun, thanks! and creative, I like the energy even in your prose before hand.
Cheers!
aawww…thanks dear..
welcome to megzone…glad you liked it..
and i hope you keep visiting 😀
its mazing write gal 😀 superb:D
and my tongue is all twisted 😀
oi hoi…
thannks princess..
pehli baar khudse kuch create kiyaa hai..
poetry style..
m glad it came out well 😀
Heh.. very creative and nice. Do check out my blog, u might find something of interest to you.
hey thanks Ashwin..
i sure shall check it out..
thanks for writing in..
i hope you keep visiting…
Good work, love the rhymes, and I find myself coming back here once every two days it seems and every time I am so far down the list of comments, *sigh* oh well just a matter of time when I catch you right after u posted something. till then I am just hunting for your good works.
Oh Boy..!! you really did like the poem dint ya..?? 😉
thanks a ton dear..
such motivating comments.. thats what keep me going… 🙂
I just came by to thank you for the kind words on my poem. and I wanted to say that your poem was delightfully creative, and I thought it certainly achieved what you were aiming for. : )
awww..thanks dear…
your poems were really nice 🙂
i did enjoy reading them,..
m glad you liked mine tooo..
do keep visiting 😀
You’re right about the tongue twister poem…
lolz…thanks Kalpesh..
i hope your tongue’s better now 😉
My ghosh! I am still strugling to read and understasnd!From where did you find those words?
kkiieekkiieekkiiee
aawww… poor you.. i hope your tongue and mind are both better now 🙂
the words.. well…err.. most of them are onomatopoeic words.. and they are not that difficult to remember 😉
how fun is this! i’ve gotta try this one day! thanks 4 sharing this! such talent!
~IS
awww…thanks dear..
m glad you liked it..
if you try do lemme know too… 🙂
thannks for writing in and do keep visiting…
i hate thes poem becuase there so so so so so so so so so so
so so so so so so easy
huh… 😯
im so so so so so so so so sorry taht you hate it Afra.. but thanks for dropping by and letting me know your thoughts 🙂
Hi, nice to see this blog..
and nice poem, full of rhythm 🙂
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