After a loooooonnngg time i have dabbled in 55 Fiction…
this might.. jsut might not gel well with many.. so pardon me if it seems a tad over the top… with creativity there is no boundaries…
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Struggle
Her clothes strewn across the room, she lay in bed..
Besieged.. Trying to breath but senses defied her..
He was still holding her.. She tried to scream but voice failed her..
She tried to struggle her way out..
But he wasn’t yielding.. He pushed and clutched her hands..
At last she bit her lips & breathed.. Orgasm..
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That’s it from MEGZONE for now..
Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rocking..!! Keep Blogging…!!!
Cheerios..!!! 
Megzone 
mujhe laga…….the guy is going to kill her………… 🙂
popat 😆
Nice twist at the end. 🙂
hey thanks sayak 😀
Whoaaa!! Megz, this is your best work till date. 😀 😀
LOL 😀
thanks dude 🙂
nicely done
thanks Vi 🙂
well done, very vivid images…
you shall keep doing it.
aaww…thanks Ji 😀
/you shall keep doing it./
that im not sure 🙂
http://g-man-mrknowitall.blogspot.com/
notify G-Man, he is the host…
Happy Writing!
hey thanks Ji 🙂
surely i shall let him know :d
is it hot in here or is it just me…smiles.
nice 55.
you should link up with g-man on friday!
its jus you brian 😛 jus you 😀 😆
yep Ji said the same 🙂
i shall try to let him know that 😀
You’re gonna post this in channel one also huh?
i dint want to 😛 but sree says its okeiii 😀
now ur question makes me think 😛
Wow…great job!! I totally loved it!!
LOL 😀
and i thot ur gonna gimme a 😯 look jus like ravi did 😛
Wow! Very good!
heyyyy thanks menina 😀
good one! climaxed well!!!
thankkk youuuu 😀
Megzone…?
Are you old enough to be writing stories like this?
Hahahahaha…
Excellent 55 My Dear
HOTTTTTTTT!!!!!
Make sure that you post your next 55 by 8:00PM Thursday night, then come leave me a comment on MY 55 post…Thanks
Galen
errr…. i guess im old enough 😛
26 is not too young G-man 😀 😛
i shall try to come up with some more 55ers if i can 😀
acha tha!
liked the pic very much!! 🙂
thankiiess lady 😀
I like it i like it i like it… INTENSE!
whooaa…!! thanks 🙂
Awesome dear……… try posting it in ch1 and see the replies…
really hot 🙂 and nice twist 🙂
and sorry for late comment 😦
oi chuppeee… ch1 mein i will twist the end a bit and then put…
i dont want any social-reformers attacking my bloggy 😉
Ermmm.. A really audacious one up there and commendable indeed.
Good job Magzy!
errrmmm….. thanks is all i can manage to say 🙂
cos i like the commendable part but the use of audacious along with ur errmmm.. makes me a tad wary 😳
thankiiesss dear 🙂
great 55, totally unexpected, then again… this is the megzone 🙂
whooaa..!! thats a great compliment Adam 😀
thanks a ton 🙂
Tu aisa/ye sab bhi likhti hia :-S
Speechless 😐
oieee
ye AISA/YE ka matlab kyaa hia
its just a 55 er
doosri baat if u are a writer u must experiment everything..
and most importantly be open minded…
Its not the question of being open-minded rather it’s about where actually lascivious write-ups could be appreciated 🙂
I never denied for you being a wonderful writer and this too is simply a master piece, but then as i have already discussed with ya where it looks better 🙂
N yup a writer should experiment everything + should know where to trumpet about it 🙂
“Opinion differs and so do WE” 😀
@chudel
baapreee… 😯
that was some insight lady 😀 😛
thankiiess hai point noted mohatarma 😉
Hey, I simply loved it… keep up the awesome work going 🙂
Ayush
ayushrastogi.wordpress.com
thanks Ayush…
glad to know you liekd it 😀