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ESCAPE
I was sitting by the window sill
Staring at a faraway hill
Should I take the plunge?
My heart began to lunge
Wondering what to do
Perusing what to construe
Iβm in such a soup
Oh lord I have been duped
Should I jump out of the window?
Oh jeezz but itβs so low..
Heck I could still get out
But what if someone sees & gives a shout
Oh them I can always tackle
Even hang them up in shackle
How bleak is my future
Everything is a torture
I have time lemme jump
She calls out & my heart thumps
“Dinners ready we can eat”
There goes another chance in heap
When O lord will I escape her wrath
To escape her concoctions show me the path
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HAHA! very very funny!
Finally you got time for BAT
LOL at the tag “wife-bad cook” You’ll be getting a lot of traffic for this! π
@zorro..
thanks re… yeaahhh… finally i got my chance to BAT π
bowling kar kar ke thakk gayi π
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well on a serious note.. yes indeed finally i did participate and in many thanks to you and raavan.. warna as usual bhool jaati π
Ha ha! LOL! Well written. And as Saurabh pointed out, what a tag! =)
hey welcome to megzone.. and thanks a ton π
ah.. well.. wanted the tags to be in tandem with the poem π
thanks for commenting and i hope you keep visiting π
Likes the simple way you presented… Lovely interlinking of words…
~ Keep the spark alive ~
Cheers LIFE
JD
My BAT Post
Hey thanks JD…
glad to have you in my blogspace…
I hope you keep visitng.. and yes im on my way to read your BAT π
Really a funny post Meghana. Very nicely written.
Loved it !
Romeo π
hey thanks Romeo…
Thanks for stopping by and i hope you keep visiting π
That was hilarious. I didn’t get the story behind the poem until i read βDinners ready we can eatβ.
Nice poem. π
All the best for blog-a-ton! π
aaww…Nethra thank you sooooo much π
well i wanted to build a wee bit of suspense whilst writing the poem..But i did wanna drop a lil hint hence the first pic of an OLD MAN π
thanks for writing in dear π
i hope you do keep visiting π
LOL!! Hilarious one!! I simply love poems esp the Humorous ones!!
Glad you could identify yourself with my post!! π
All the Best for B-A-T!!
Value your Comments…Keep them coming!!
Hope to see more such posts from you!!
hey thanks RUmya..
yes loved your post thoroughly enjoyed it…
thanks for Dropping by.. All the best to you too..
N i do hope you keep visiting π
lol.. niceone meghana.. For a foodie like me, I got goosebumps thinking about sch a possible future :p
Welcome to Blogaton.. Please start following the blog asap to get blogrolled..
aahhh….the BAT Founder himself…
awww… i knw.. its a nightmare when you end up with such a spouse π
GoD bless you with a wonderful chef-wife π
Vipul Followed already π
please do blogroll me π
hi Meghana, are u sure u are an amateur? sounds off track!
lovely rhyme u have, and the theme of wife being a bad cook was hilarious.. never predicted that ending..
All the best for BATOM 10 π
Escape
LEo.. well i still believe i am an amateur cos there still room for improvement π
aawww..thanks Leo… glad to know you guys liked it..
thanks for dropping in and i hope you keep visiting π
One of the best escape I read .. a relief from depression around in the posts !! .. Thank you Meghna, for making me smile ! All the best for BAT:)
..escape !
hey Sourav…thanks a ton buddy π
yes i did come across quite some serious ESCAPE posts myself π
glad to knw i could make people smile π
all the best to you too
thanks a ton for dropping by and i hope you keep visiting π
Make me come back you Miss Analyst! π
hahah…so funny π
You have a vivid imagination Meg π
Awwwww…thanks dear π
glad to know you liked it and tht i managed to bring in a smile π
do keep visitng its refreshing to see your comments here π
Different sort of an escape. π Quite a unique take. Nice. Very relatable. π
And You mean mean girl. π You wait. I’ll show this to the missus and let you know what her reaction was. π
aaww… sudhi.. dont badnamkarofy my name to ur missus..
i just remembered your status on FB last week and hence thought u mite wanna read it π
LOL that is funny.
hey thanks Vi π
Wow! A post starting off with the usually gloomy tone associated with escape topic and a humorous twist ! Cool stuff! Best of luck for the Blog-a-ton.
hey welcome to megzone π
well i did want to maintain teh suspense factor in the poem π
glad you liked it π
Thanks for dropping in and i hope you keep visiting π
Ah! finally a happy post and a poem too… Lol!!! ….
-Cheers
Dhiman
hey thanks Dhiman.. π
yepp.. i have been reading a lot of escapades today and all seem to be kinda serious except maybe a couple here n there… π
thanks for dropping by and i hope you keep visting π
LOL…really enjoyed it. This poem has this rare feeling of being tragic in the beginning and gradually changed its tone to humor!! Wow..quite a feat.Loved it totally!!!
hey thanks a ton DUDE π
compliments from the DUDE…aaww thankiiess π
liked the twist of humour in the end… The theme was a bit on the pessimistic side but the way you created a humorous feel to it just make sit all the more awesome.. HAts off to you for coming up with such a beaten the path thought
heyyyy thanks SUSH π
that was sweeett of you π
nice humorous verses…and a tangy twist.Good stuff.
hey thanks buddy π
good to know you liked it.. thanks for dropping by and i hope you keep visitin π
Great lines and funny too. Awesome as usual, Meg π
Hope you’re having a great weekend. cheerios
aawww..thanks Adam π
yep the weekend has been good so far.. π
i hope you have been having a wonderful weekend too π
Cheerios π
//When O lord will I escape her wrath
To escape her concoctions show me the path//
hahahaha the twist was totally rocking π
well penned girl π
mummy maregi tujhe π
thaaankiiieeeesss Princess..
naa naa maiin aur mumma are good cooks… π
HUM TUM AUR GHOST movie ka asar hai π
That was funny. I am still laughing. Nice post!
Sureindran R. – Escape
hey thanks Sureindran…
good to know you liked..
thanks for dropping by and i hope you keep visiting π
handsome writing!
Happy May!
aaww..thanks Ji π
Great write Meg…LOL
hey thanks a ton nalini..
glad to see you on my space π
Very nice, he he he .
hey thank saro π
thanks for stopping by and i hope you keep visiting π
3 poetry awards,
2 friendship award…
Happy Sunday!
aawwwwwwww……..thankss soo much JI
you are indeed the sweetestestest π
hilarious and humorous …
liked the twist…
chill one π
hey mahesh… welcome to megzone.. and im glad you liked the poem π
thanks for dropping by and i hope you keep visiting π
lol, very nice:)
heyyy thanks keerth π
thanks for dropping by and i hope you keep visiting π
Nice one…such painful plight bcoz of a wife who doesnt know how to cook…nice
Shahid
aawww…thanks Shahid…
yep imagine having to taste all weird concoctions that is called food π
thanks for stopping by and i hope you keep visiting π
LOL ….well written …beautiful .. it is ..n humorous tooo !
awards for u … π
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aawww…thanks viddhi π
sryy….the wrong link π
http://viddhi-a.blogspot.com/2010/05/awards-awards-awards.html
aaaww…no problem baby π
haha real nice poem.. jumping off is preferable to be a guinea pig to someone’s notorious concoctions, eh? π
liked the thoughts behind this..very simple n also, a real good twist!
ALL THE BEST FOR B-A-T-O-M!
hey thanks a ton pravin π
well.. we shall see wen u are made the guinea pig π
all the best to you too π
Wow! that was a wonderful hilarious take on the prompt π
Loved it π π
The cartoon is adding to the charm of your post π
Keep up the good work girl!!
aawww….thank you so much dear…
thanks for dropping by and i hope you keep visitin π
well this sounds really cool
aaww…thank you dear..
thanks for stopping by and i hope you keep visiting π
the 1st pic is really good…
aawww…thansk swayambhu
you’ve got a huge poetry talent megzone.this poem is lovely , it unfolds gradually and the rhyming is nice.well done.
aaww…thank you dear π
you all have the sweetest and encouraging words for me π
This is great. I love the rhyming, the story line and the twist at the end…cheers!!
hey thank you sooo much Emmanuel.. thats really sweet of you π
Nice one.. i have read a lot of BAT on this escape thingy why is it Men are trying to escape from women In quiet a few he he he he
Loved the way it was written … wish i could write so nicely .. the BAT scares me dont even know what it means most of the time …
Hope I dont get the calls “Dinners Read we can EAT”… ooooh
hey thanks Bikram..
well.. isnt that the most easiest and commonest form of ESCAPE π
men always either run behind women or away from women π
oh cmon.. isme darne ki kyaa baat hai..
trust me just start.. its the first step thats always difficult for everything
wud u believe me if i said i was once scared of english poems..
i could find my thoughts free flowing in hindi shayaris but english poems gave me nightmare..
i tried and tried and this is where i stand.. π
SO TRY BUDDY.. π
NO HARM DONE right??
yeah will give it a try one day lets see and yep no harm done …
and yeh kya hai men always either run behind women or away from women
lai excuse me girls bhi karti hain π he heh ee
hahahaha I loved this one. By far the funniest. The pic is very impressive though. Good wishes for BAT
would love to read your other poems etc. marking you. π
good wishes for your writing
heyyyy…thank you soo much dear π
best wishes to you too.. π
do read them at leisure would like to have your comments on the same π
thanks for dropping by and i hope you keep visiting π
Happy May,
Happy Tuesday!
aaaww…Ji thanks a ton..
you are indeed the sweetest π
Great poem and a lovely theme just love it…well written with a twist at first I though it was cliff π
hey thank you soo much Alonso… that was swwweeeerttt of you π
Lovely poem! Made me smile… π
aawww…thanks dear π
good to know it made u smile π
Fun and funny poem!! π
Poor guy… my sympathies are for him!
All the best for BAT-10!
Cheers π
aaww…thanks dear Shilpa…
poor guy indeed π
Lol… π Here I was reading with a grim face the whole time until I came to the last few lines. Yanjaaayed thoroughly. π
I wonder how you guys find those rhyming words. I’m enthralled really. Too good, yaar. π
All the best for batom!
i know so many sad and bad entries π
someone had to make the meter humourous π
and i just tried to π
LOL π your poem made me smile and so did that cartoon π One of the very few light hearted posts. Most of them are depressing and tragic (including mine). This one was nice π
aaawwww….thanks dear…
yes i know one of those very few posts that were humourous
@bikram…
same reasons π
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