awright… Another Set of poems…
hindi with translation…
the hindi one follows a rhyme-scheme of abcb whereas due to translation the english version lacks any..
so do pardon me for that 🙂
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Kaante…!!
Jal rahi hoon bekasi mein
Kass rahi hai tanhaaiya
Lipta dil ghamo ki bebasi mein
Chup gayi meri parchaiya
Vaadiyo ki tamanna thi
Ek zarra bhi na mila
Is dil ke bageeche mein
Ek phool bhi na khila
Goonj raha dil mein
Shor karte sannate
Banjar reh gayi dil ki zameen
Mile bhi tho bas sirf kaante
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now for the english translations
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Thorns…!!
Burning in destitution
Loneliness constricts me
Wrapped in helplessness
My shadows hide away
I dreamt of valleys
Couldn’t even find a grain
In this garden of my heart
Not even a flower blossomed
Echoes in my heart
A cacophony of silence
In this heart’s barren terra firma
All I got are thorns
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I hope you guys liked this.. do let me know..
Thats it from Megzone for now..!!
Keep Smiling..!! Keep Rocking…!! Keep Blogging..!!
Cheerios…!! 
Megzone 
Just loved it….and the images that went with it were marvolous!
aaww…thanks Martin.. thats sweeet of you 🙂
wah wah wah wah wah ji wah…:D
abee wah ke aage bhi tho kiuch bol??
Oye.. aaj kal tere jindagi me itne gam kyon aagaaye hain?
waise nice poem and as usual wonderful pic.. poem ke sath perfect hain. 🙂
Dunia se milte hain kaante, tabhi to phool dete hai pyaar main
Dard to cheez kiya hai, ashiq to jaan bhi dete hai pyaar main 🙂
Tumhari dosti, tumhari har wafa hi kafi hai,
tamam umar yeh asra hi kafi hai.
Jahan kahi bhi milo mil ke muskara dena,
khushiyo ke liye yeh hasi hi kafi hai… 🙂 🙂
keep smiling!
ghamo se kehdo
meri zindagi se chale jaye
ghamo se kehdo
meri khushiyaa lauta jaye
ghamo se kehdo
jeena chahti hoon main
ghamo se kehdo
yu na muje raahon mein giraaye
I am not going to read any more sad poems on your blog!
teek hai fine mat padho 😦
Great poem.. 😐
great poem bolke wo smiley kyu re :O
love it!
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Love you!
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shakira
aawww…thanks shakira
its beautiful.
i’m so glad you yranslated it
hey thank you sooo much dear 🙂
beautiful…eng version is beter..though…:)
m jelous….:P 😛
ur amazing….
aaww…cmon vids.. u write awesome urself u neednt be jealous at all 😀
Me got award,tribute and nominations for you here. hugs shakira
aawwww…thanks you sooo much sweet shakira 🙂
Love your poems I am reading as much as i can.
Hope your having a wonderful day, here is a kindness card from me and you may pass it along to other friends including me 🙂
Have a great weekend and keep on been creative 🙂
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aawww…thanks dear alonso.. thats really very sweet of you 🙂
another wow after the BAT.. article.. loved both the version..
speaking of thorns its good i think.. cause if you see and look around in nature.. the most beautiful flowers grow on trees or shrubs which have nasty thorns.. just my view of seeing…
Excellent 🙂
aaww…thanks BIKRAM 🙂
hey thats a nice insight 🙂
phir dukhi dukhi 🙂
maine ye sagar ko parhke sunaya… bola mast hai 😀
but why so dukhi dukhi re … write tjose attitude wala poems na 🙂
aaww…sagar ko mera thanks kehna 🙂
dukhi man mere.. sun raji ka kehna…
jahaa nahi chainaa wahaan nai rehna 😛
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I honor you the three awards from my post, please feel free to share with your other poetry friends…
have fun!
thank you for the long time support.
cheers!
lovely poem!
aawww… Ji thank you soooo much.. you are indeed the sweetest 🙂
simply fantastic duo.
aaww..thanks trisha 🙂